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Dreams

Member since 2005 · Posted 7 Jun 2005 · 5 comments

Take a glance at peace. Quiet, calm, and harmless. How lovely it is. Now take a look at our world. Death, shouts, and frightening. The vision of war. All the peace had vanished, only left with grim and evil. Can you imagine the world turn into a frightful globe? So lets begin our dreams. Our hope and peace. Let Earth be the most wonderful place to be.

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[n/a] lil_evil_boi 7-Jun-05/8:02 PM Reply
Hopefully this poem wont cause another "discussion" again. Anyways, I dont really think the title is suitable for the poem so I need some ideas. Thanks~
[n/a] deleted user 7-Jun-05/8:05 PM Reply
Perhaps consider 'Peace And War'? And what kind of "discussion" are you talking about? By the way, this is like another one of your successful masterpieces. Nice.
[n/a] lil_evil_boi › deleted user 8-Jun-05/6:50 PM Reply
Thanks for providing ideas. Greatly appreciated.
[n/a] ALChemy 8-Jun-05/7:04 AM Reply
How 'bout "This is an egg. This is an egg on crack. Any questions."
[n/a] lil_evil_boi › ALChemy 8-Jun-05/6:52 PM Reply
Thankz. The answer to your idea of a title would be no. I just dont thing it's suitable. Thx anywayz.