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Dreams (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi

Take a glance at peace. Quiet, calm, and harmless. How lovely it is. Now take a look at our world. Death, shouts, and frightening. The vision of war. All the peace had vanished, only left with grim and evil. Can you imagine the world turn into a frightful globe? So lets begin our dreams. Our hope and peace. Let Earth be the most wonderful place to be.

wow_ur_good 7-Jun-05/8:05 PM
Perhaps consider 'Peace And War'? And what kind of "discussion" are you talking about? By the way, this is like another one of your successful masterpieces. Nice.




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