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Special Place (Free verse) by untamed_fierce
It’s only a room with shelves and books, but it’s far more magical then it looks. It’s a jet on which I soar, to lands that exist no more. Or a key with which I find, answer to questions crowding my mind. Building the habit of learning and growing, asking and researching until I reach knowing. Here I’ve been a dragon and an elf, I’ve been learned to be more myself. I think that I shall never see, a place that’s been more useful to me. With encouraging friends with wit, who tell me to dream big and never quit. It’s only a room with shelves and books, but it’s far more magical then it looks.

Up the ladder: Fire
Down the ladder: The Breedling

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6999
Posted: June 16, 2005 7:55 PM PDT; Last modified: June 16, 2005 7:55 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] lil_evil_boi @ 70.68.76.244 | 16-Jun-05/8:44 PM | Reply
Let me guess...a library?
[6] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 17-Jun-05/10:27 AM | Reply
It has such a nice rhythm that the lines which don't really stand out.
[6] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 17-Jun-05/1:37 PM | Reply
>>Here I’ve been a dragon and an elf,
I’ve been learned to be more myself.<<

After this, I expected a stanza with:
'There, I've seen seas and mountains
and bathed in cosmic fountains'

In short, I expected some sort of contrast

This subject can be so much more.
[6] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 > deleted user | 17-Jun-05/1:38 PM | Reply
Sorry for my awful rhythm...
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