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Free verse № 127183

Special Place

by untamed_fierce

Member since 2005 · Posted 16 Jun 2005 · 4 comments

It’s only a room with shelves and books, but it’s far more magical then it looks. It’s a jet on which I soar, to lands that exist no more. Or a key with which I find, answer to questions crowding my mind. Building the habit of learning and growing, asking and researching until I reach knowing. Here I’ve been a dragon and an elf, I’ve been learned to be more myself. I think that I shall never see, a place that’s been more useful to me. With encouraging friends with wit, who tell me to dream big and never quit. It’s only a room with shelves and books, but it’s far more magical then it looks.

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4 comments

[7] lil_evil_boi 16-Jun-05/8:44 PM Reply
Let me guess...a library?
[6] Dovina 17-Jun-05/10:27 AM Reply
It has such a nice rhythm that the lines which don't really stand out.
[6] deleted user 17-Jun-05/1:37 PM Reply
>>Here I’ve been a dragon and an elf,
I’ve been learned to be more myself.<<

After this, I expected a stanza with:
'There, I've seen seas and mountains
and bathed in cosmic fountains'

In short, I expected some sort of contrast

This subject can be so much more.
[6] deleted user › deleted user 17-Jun-05/1:38 PM Reply
Sorry for my awful rhythm...