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Desire (Free verse) by Chasz Misleading
Whatever I want in my own small existence I know I may have if I will it But each time I win in my so called obstacles I go back back a few days, back a few lives And after this instance I am just like brand new naked and bloody screaming for help Therefore I choose I choose not to want because not wanting leaves something there to be wanted

Up the ladder: Closed Doors
Down the ladder: Fire

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 7004
Posted: June 8, 2004 8:58 PM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2004 8:58 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] fevriere @ 62.254.128.6 | 9-Jun-04/1:42 PM | Reply
Naked and Bloody. Really? Sucks to be You, then, I spose.
[10] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 | 9-Jun-04/5:45 PM | Reply
horus8 might have written this poem about being drilled by Dean Cain while on X at a fabulous Dave Geffen pool party.
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 > zodiac | 9-Jun-04/8:00 PM | Reply
Exactly, but I'd get paid, and it'd be a quality poem.
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.253.120 > Shardik | 10-Jun-04/3:53 AM | Reply
You are such a whore, who cares if you'd get paid for it.
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