poemranker ::Desire by Chasz Misleading

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Free verse № 104646

Desire

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Jun 2004 · 4 comments

Whatever I want in my own small existence I know I may have if I will it But each time I win in my so called obstacles I go back back a few days, back a few lives And after this instance I am just like brand new naked and bloody screaming for help Therefore I choose I choose not to want because not wanting leaves something there to be wanted

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[n/a] fevriere 9-Jun-04/1:42 PM Reply
Naked and Bloody. Really? Sucks to be You, then, I spose.
[10] zodiac 9-Jun-04/5:45 PM Reply
horus8 might have written this poem about being drilled by Dean Cain while on X at a fabulous Dave Geffen pool party.
[n/a] Shardik › zodiac 9-Jun-04/8:00 PM Reply
Exactly, but I'd get paid, and it'd be a quality poem.
[n/a] richa › Shardik 10-Jun-04/3:53 AM Reply
You are such a whore, who cares if you'd get paid for it.