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Desire (Free verse) by Chasz Misleading
Whatever I want
in my own small existence
I know I may have
if I will it
But each time I win
in my so called obstacles
I go back
back a few days, back a few lives
And after this instance
I am just like brand new
naked and bloody
screaming for help
Therefore I choose
I choose not to want
because not wanting leaves something there
to be wanted
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 7008
Posted: June 8, 2004 8:58 PM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2004 8:58 PM PDT
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