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Desire (Free verse) by Chasz Misleading

Whatever I want in my own small existence I know I may have if I will it But each time I win in my so called obstacles I go back back a few days, back a few lives And after this instance I am just like brand new naked and bloody screaming for help Therefore I choose I choose not to want because not wanting leaves something there to be wanted

Shardik 9-Jun-04/8:00 PM
Exactly, but I'd get paid, and it'd be a quality poem.




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