| Re: Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL |
15-Aug-03/12:11 AM |
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durkl, lovely little poem here, didnt see it comming, well until it plainly came that is, then i saw it.
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| Re: A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
15-Aug-03/12:23 AM |
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nice little poem ya got here,
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5-Jan-04/11:36 PM |
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wow, i just looked at the ratings, i thought this one was good, i guesssss i was wrong. oh well, does anyone have any comments on it for me? thanks.
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| Re: Just A Dream by Blindpoetry |
12-Jan-04/4:26 PM |
things, brings, sings, strings, niiiice rhymes bro!
;p
oh yeah, one and ton are sweet too!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Jan-04/5:54 AM |
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my names dustin, this must be about me! im sorry i treated you so horribly! please forgive me, lets make love right now!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Jan-04/1:04 AM |
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i have a huge crush on a girl named angie too! she goes to ucla!
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| Re: Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco |
24-Nov-05/1:10 PM |
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this shouldnt be # 1, not saying it should be last though. maybe # 10293.
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| Re: Nude Falling Down Staircase by zodiac |
13-Mar-06/2:04 PM |
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i am completely baffled with this one. maybe my two year break from poetry really disconnected me from the poetic beat or something
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| Re: By Request by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
13-Mar-06/3:12 PM |
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very self referencial of this poem to self reference as it does so.
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| Re: Settling in by INTRANSIT |
13-Mar-06/3:16 PM |
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consider yourself part of the furniture
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| Re: Numbers In Heaven by Dovina |
13-Mar-06/3:34 PM |
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were you a math major in college?
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| Re: =, <>, & . . . by Dovina |
13-Mar-06/3:35 PM |
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i would vote this a ~`&* but that option isnt available so a 7 will have to suffice.
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| Re: I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
15-Mar-06/1:35 AM |
"Love bound to lust is cheap
and dies with our youth, stealing innocence. I never wanted this"......... is what i liked about this.
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| Re: Engine Braking by INTRANSIT |
1-Dec-07/10:08 PM |
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Not bad, good imagery, puts me there in the conductor chair (?)... but leaves me a little confused about why I'm reading this.
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| Re: Uptown spell! by liya |
1-Dec-07/10:18 PM |
I'm sorry for the shabby rating
but this poem is just not my thing
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| Re: A bereaved search by liya |
1-Dec-07/10:20 PM |
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Good rhyming, and I guess form counts for something.
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| Re: Easter Egg Hunt by Dovina |
1-Dec-07/10:26 PM |
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So what you're saying is that God looks down on the brightest of humans like we look down on rotary telephones?
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| Re: Over the Horizon by Miggy |
1-Dec-07/10:27 PM |
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Sounds like a country song, I hate country songs.
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| Re: Before Dawn by Christof |
1-Dec-07/10:30 PM |
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I'm sure there are more accurate adjectives for a teenage boy's bedsheets, but 9 for you.
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| Re: Missing - You by Skamper |
1-Dec-07/10:34 PM |
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