poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Hallmark and replies

Comments byHallmark, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Utensils of creation by Damien 27 May 2005, 4:40 PM
Anyway, grammar has everything to do with writing what you feel.

For another example, you don't even know what you think and communicate like a fucking cerebral-palsied, you fucking moron

Class!

Of course it was!
Fraser Allonby Q.C.
can get no flange just arse d'you see
yet being a poor unfortunate sort
his bournville bar was made too short
there's scarcely enough to tickle the rim
Of any Gaylord's manly quim
replying on Anniversary by Hallmark 18 May 2005, 12:47 PM
10!
replying on Get well soon by Hallmark 18 May 2005, 12:44 PM
Yep!
replying on Mid Years by Dovina 16 May 2005, 10:35 PM
please a,b,c me
or not!
depending on if! i'm a fuck face or not!
on Learning to Drive by jessicazee 16 May 2005, 10:34 PM
I don't understand poetry very much could you explian. I I don't understand this: Our driver's Ed was private

i'm not sure about the caulking bit either as this brings to mind prehistoric ships to me.
can you help?
I'm trying to learn
on Nesting Instinct of Women by Dovina 16 May 2005, 9:16 PM
The first paragraph suggests to me that the female is a school girl at an all girls school.
the second that she fears, fears, fears to leave this state, but also wants to.
The third that she can go back to the school
What have i done wrong?
on Mid Years by Dovina 16 May 2005, 8:44 PM
the fogginess of penile dementia!
a superbeflous line

as are all the others
3 point 1 point 2 point 1 point 5

jesus woman!
replying on Mid Years by Dovina 16 May 2005, 8:32 PM
Are all women emotional train wrecks?
Does dovina have no idea how to control her emotions?
Do all women worship emotions as a god?
What a hypochnondriac needs is a really good kicking! and they also need a really good whacking! and a good fucking over!
You will turn round and say OH MY GOD rhetorical & also ironicalisationalism
I will ask are you a homosexualist?
on The cry of the Locust by nothingtoanyone 10 May 2005, 10:11 AM
Is line 6 a call to all bearded people.
Beards can be weighty can't they
It means he was fat.
Alexander
on For the love of joey(revised) by mystic enoch 9 May 2005, 6:20 PM
Thanks, this is spiritually moving!
on Strings by Fayt 9 May 2005, 5:52 PM
Is this an attack on religion?
replying on I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake 9 May 2005, 5:40 PM
They're old enough when they leave school, and they leave school at 3:30.
replying on I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake 9 May 2005, 5:39 PM
16 is old enough for coffee isn't it?
on Mistaken by midnight 9 May 2005, 5:33 PM
Poo also!
on The Magician by Hooman 9 May 2005, 5:32 PM
Poo!
on Afraid by LovePoet 9 May 2005, 5:30 PM
Brilliant!
Smell my fear
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9 May 2005, 5:21 PM
Tut