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Re: Daywalker by Blade 14-Oct-02/6:55 AM
God, won't you guy's please stop bickering...if you haven't noticed the point of this site is to post your poems, and help other peolpe fix theres. Blade, don't listen to some of the asses on this site, It's a nice poem, yes it does need some touchs up, but other than that I like it. I give it a ~*5*~ =)
Re: A Little Life by Tom Colebrooke 14-Oct-02/8:36 AM
Interesting point of view tom...interesting...lol...hehe But I like bumblebees, hehe so I give yeah a 10 =) hehe go bumblebees!!

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regarding some deleted poem... 15-Oct-02/3:08 PM
ugg, don't listen to the ass whloes on this site, you ahve no clue what there blabbing about. I like abgels so they all can come kiss my as spersonally if they got something aginst them. Good poem =)
Re: ... by logun2002ya 28-Oct-02/10:46 AM
hm...logun...I like...it's slow yet easy...but I like it...simple yet interesting...9 for ya ^._.^
Re: TONIGHT by adrenalize 30-Oct-02/6:24 PM
I think the first stanza would sound better like this: Tonight the rain is falling
But Iv run out of tears
Because crying in the rain
Never makes the pain disappear, it's just a thought, and I think maybe if you go through this poem one more time, and try to clean it up some, it would be a beautiful poem! But other than that, I must say I like it =)
Re: Wearing Black, as Memory Dictates by UnityMitford 5-Nov-02/7:01 AM
Deep. I can't say I understand this poem fully, but I do like it very much so! =)
Re: Base by Freya 10-Nov-02/10:19 AM
Interesting I must say, Interesting indeed. This poem consists of some lists...but I like that, and I like this poem...it's a new theme I have never read before...or seen, and I like it! 10 =) Good Work!
Re: A little by The Eskimo King 11-Nov-02/10:17 AM
Shouldn't it be "A little bit of something, each and every day, will help sooth the pains, of items on e-bay" ( you left out the of )and um...this is just something you threw together wasn't it...It ryhemes yes, but it's not...poetic, lol.
Re: No Idea by Miggy 22-Nov-02/8:11 AM
Another one of your great little songs...so young with such a talent!! Good job once agian
Re: MY LOVE FOR YOU by Normo 31-Jan-03/8:26 PM
Short, and Sweet. I must admit I love it! an 8 for you! But I think I would like to see it made a little longer, just a thought, =)
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Feb-03/3:44 PM
:'( Beautiful...I truley love it, 10. If I may ask this is from experence?
Re: The dance as old as time by wEdible Underpantsw 28-Mar-03/4:48 AM
I agree with Stephen...filth
Re: Isolate by Beseech 31-Mar-03/1:17 PM
Beseech don't listen to wink minded people like 'lark angel' just feel sorry for them since they have nothing better to do then to TRY and pray on people. I honestly Like this 9 :)
Re: if tommorow never comes by junkyarddog13 2-Apr-03/12:57 PM
Welcome to poemranker junkyarddog! =) I like what you have done here there are some parts that can be cleaned up, and revised, but ann in all I gave it a 7 =)
Re: Wanna Be Porn Star. by spank me baby yeah 2-Apr-03/1:03 PM
(cough) uh huh.. =\ *cough* waco *cough*
Re: Morman On A Bike by Blindproject217 3-Apr-03/8:39 AM
*giggles* Interesting. Yet I like the flow of it, and all, So I give it a -10- ;) Granted I dunno what a mormon is but yeah... :-\ blonde moment! lol, just messing :P Good Poem Blind =)
Re: ~For Katie on her Birthday by Misha Sanz 30-May-03/1:34 PM
Aww!! Isn't Misha such a sweetie *kisses* Thanks Hunniz
Re: i need a title by That One 23-Aug-05/11:56 AM
Aren't Sonnets suppose to have 10 syllables in each line?!
regarding some deleted poem... 23-Aug-05/11:59 AM
thank god someone wrote a Sonnet using proper form!
Re: Loose Leaf by Miggy 19-Sep-07/11:14 PM
hey miggy, I bet you don't remember me but you gave me a little help with one of my poems a very long time ago, lol :) Glad to see your still writing! =) Anyways, I love the feeling your trying to express here, but when writing a lyric try making a little beat in your mind and singing it. This way you can make sure everything flows together and your not going to run out of breath trying to get everything in. But over-all I enjoyed your imagery.
-Katie


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