Re: Life : Paradox by amateurR	13-Sep-02/12:26 PM
Me like!! 10/10 great poem indeed =)
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-02/12:29 PM
Deep, very, very Deep. But it's idea and it's flow i do like! 9/10 \/)"(\/ (_o_) ruff!!!!!! / \/) (| | | |) now there's a puppy, be happy, LoL (Sorry if it send this and the puppy don't look like a puppy, LoL )
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-02/5:26 AM
Cute, cute, cute, cute, as usual coming from you D.A. Strange I must admit, interesting yes, so I'll give I a 6. JK that just sounded good, I give em an 8!! =) "hi hoe hi hoe it's off to work I go" Gotta go back to school, joy. But cute poem!! =)
Re: Words Only of Love by loneshadow29	19-Sep-02/4:40 AM
Awww. I like this poem shadow! Cute, sweet, it's just awwww. LoL. good work. 9/10
Re: My Gift to You by loneshadow29	19-Sep-02/4:45 AM
*snif, snif* It's so...beautiful. I like!! 9/10
Re: A Gift of Beauty... by loneshadow29	24-Sep-02/4:24 AM
*snif*snif, that's so pretty!! It's a 10 all the way
Re: Wedding Day... by loneshadow29	24-Sep-02/4:30 AM
I like the idea of this poem, it's one no one else here has tried, So it's something new for a change. and even if you don't like it..well it means something to him anyway, so unless you have something nice to say, or advice to make the poem any better, then don't say anything at all. I think it's a great poem shadow! =)
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Oct-02/4:50 AM
Forget about her, well go rp together!! LoL. Nice Haiku...even though I'm not sure exactly what Haiku is, I still like it =) I'm blonde don't mind me =)
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Oct-02/4:53 AM
Your 21!!LoL I just did the math...well I could be wrong...LoL, but nice poem, I like your point of view 9!! =)
Re: Words of Wisdom... by loneshadow29	7-Oct-02/1:00 PM
Hey shadow! Long time no see!! Well I've been waiting for your next poem then...there it is. hehe. Well hm...you should know me by now...I don't like when people go on about nothing, just mindless chitter chatter...it bugs the heck out of me, and it's just a waste of space. But this poem isn't like that!!! =) I love it, great poem, and I like your point of view! 9/10 =)
Re: Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator	7-Oct-02/6:45 PM
Okay...I'm a blonde!! I'm not a bembo :( snif snif, not all us blondes are little whores you know? I'm not vein, but I am attractive, and I'm still a virgine...Imagine that...and I'm not a slut :) so not all blondes are bad, hehe. Okay enough of that, I get what you are reffering too. But besides that I love you poem!! I can't wait to read more of your work!! 9/10 =)
Re: A Soldier's Promise by Ninoy_Instigator	7-Oct-02/6:51 PM
Snif Snif...I'm going to cry...that's so sweet!! she's a lucky girl, damn I won't a guy to write a poem for me, but the only thing they think of is how the hell there gonna get me in bed...but ne ways, LOL I love this poem, hehe I love your work!! 10/10 =)
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Oct-02/6:54 PM
Hey! I'm sorry Everytime you IM I have to go, or I can't talk right away, it seems like I don't have time for chit chat anymore I"m sorry!! Im me today and I"ll promise I"ll talk to you!! Oh yeah and like usual you pull out another fabulouse lyric!! You know I love you work! E-mail me if you ever get the chance!! Wuv ya!! =) 10 10
Re: Sanity's Defeat by loneshadow29	8-Oct-02/10:00 AM
Brandon, another great poem! I like the feel of this one, I like the point of the whole thing. This poem was really interesting to me. Keep up the good work brandon!! And good luck at work!!
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Oct-02/10:12 AM
Brandon, yes I am going through all your poems and commenting on them, hehe. But this one...like other's are so sad, and I know little about you, and want to know more, but what I do know about you, is that a little part of you is in each of your poems, and most of them are so sad, cheer up, things will get worse before they get better, but they will get better. Me and you have a lot in commin. Now on about this poem, Like always you have a differnet way of looking at things then most, and I like this, I'm reall tired of reading these poems that are all from the same point, about the same things...some things just get way over done, I will admit I have wrote one of those poems =( but I did change it so =) But I do like this poem, I would love to see if flow more...well maybe not flow but more...like BAM!!! If you know what I'm talking about...Ive never really been to good with words, for I am blonde, and this explains this. I'm stuck in my raiting...wither an 8 or a 9...I'm leaning more 9ish...10/9 =)
Re: Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator	9-Oct-02/5:02 AM
um...dang it...nope I can't say I can whisel my way out of that one DA, but still mocking me with out a jk, or indicating that you where 'messin' around. LoL!! =) and I know your not slow...and I don't mean to give off this Bitch aperience...and good poem Anthony
Re: Which Side of Darkness by Wulf	9-Oct-02/7:12 AM
I'm sorry i didn't see this poem sooner. I love the poem you have writen here. It's an interesting perseptive, and flow. 10/10 =) And I can't wait to read more of your work =)
Re: Dilemma of a Crip by Ninoy_Instigator	10-Oct-02/9:33 AM
Cript is a big gang where i'm from, there everywhere, and most people here are scared of them. I do know guy's that are just like what you said in your poem...but there haveing a hard time getting out, it's not as easy as it says, but now about the poem, I like your idea for this...it's something no one else here so far I believe has tried, yet stuff like that happens in life...alot. I give it a 7/10 =)
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Oct-02/7:01 AM
Needs to be more indepth, instead of simple rhyming words.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Oct-02/8:03 PM
Dustin I like what you did here. I like the way you ended it, I also think the last 2 lines finsih it off. =)