| Re: Confusion by ThoughtfulSoul |
7-Nov-02/8:00 PM |
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It was horrible. And then the pink hippo appeared. Was it as scary as the real thing is?
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| Re: epicentre by richa |
12-Nov-02/11:11 AM |
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Jesa. You sound like Guillevic. That's a compliment, by the way.
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| Re: Handy Smurf by Bachus |
12-Nov-02/11:22 AM |
What the devil? Since when has there been one smurf smarter than the others?
Oh, wait, this must be on the TV show or something. I'll stick to the originals, thanks.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:03 PM |
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Brava. The opening line alone...
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| Re: Returning by INTRANSIT |
12-Nov-02/12:08 PM |
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Okay, this is rather better.
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| Re: A mans obligation by kliq |
12-Nov-02/12:12 PM |
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Please tell me 'tow teachers' isn't a typo. It's much funnier as it is.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:15 PM |
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'And they still make me pay taxes...' -- brilliant.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:17 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:34 PM |
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Extremely well-written, but then that's to be expected by now. In some things induction is quite acceptable.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:40 PM |
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'The banshee of the wind...' Beautiful. Get rid of the last two lines, though. They ruin the whole thing.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:47 PM |
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Hmmm... maybe one need be a woman to fully appreciate the last couple of stanzas. The last three lines reeks too much of wiccanism for me.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:56 PM |
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Well, one guess: this ain't about England's Queen Anne.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Nov-02/6:36 AM |
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Bof. I don't particularly like this one. The second stanza especially.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Nov-02/6:39 AM |
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The evidence suggests that you ARE Nicholas Jones and laughing at yourself. And if you didn't want to put Welsh, you could always have changed the line 'Squelch squelch'. 4 because I'm feeling strangely generous today.
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| Re: L.O.V.E. by bxjay170 |
13-Nov-02/6:43 AM |
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I suspect you'd find them in the line breaks. This would explain why you never find love.
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| Re: Tomorrow by joho117 |
13-Nov-02/6:52 AM |
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Well, personally, if I had known on the tenth of September last year what was going to happen the day after, there are a number of people I know I would have tried to convince go visit the World Trade Centre...
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| Re: ... by logun2002ya |
14-Nov-02/11:43 AM |
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'Eye pinch'? God that would hurt.
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| Re: ... by logun2002ya |
14-Nov-02/11:44 AM |
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What do you feel on paper? Spores? Chip grease? Old semen?
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| Re: ... by logun2002ya |
14-Nov-02/11:46 AM |
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I'm doing my best not to be you. God spare me from that fate.
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| Re: The Fox by cleverdevice |
14-Nov-02/11:49 AM |
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Get rid of the last line. Please.
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