Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina |
12-Mar-06/1:27 PM |
i like poems that tell a story and this one was very good. I enjoyed it alot.
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Re: Spoken word (draft) by Adriaan |
12-Mar-06/1:17 PM |
i like a beginning and an ending, too...this left me scratching my head...in wonder
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Re: a comment on We Do Not Write About by faithmairee |
12-Mar-06/12:55 PM |
first of all, thanks for your comments...the stirrings was used on purpose...and the magazine that this was published in paid me the most they pay for a single poem to publish it...i dunno, i will think about your suggestions though.
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Re: a comment on Gone Bad by faithmairee |
12-Mar-06/12:38 PM |
Thank you for the wonderful compliment! You made my day! I love the blues...particularly chicago and the delta blues!!!
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Re: The Devil's Carnival by Ranger |
12-Mar-06/12:25 PM |
The pleasure was mine. You get a 10 from me for such a great poem!
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Re: a comment on The Best Thing I Ever Had by faithmairee |
12-Mar-06/12:22 PM |
Thank you so much for your comments. You made my heart smile!
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Re: The Devil's Carnival by Ranger |
12-Mar-06/12:19 PM |
Wow! This is extremely well written! The flow was wonderful and your delivery very powerful.
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Re: a comment on Gone Bad by faithmairee |
12-Mar-06/12:14 PM |
I'm taking that as a compliment...thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my lyric.
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Re: a comment on The Best Thing I Ever Had by faithmairee |
12-Mar-06/12:07 PM |
While I have performed in public, I am a writer and a poet. Thank you for your wonderful remarks. They are deeply appreciated.
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Re: a comment on Hurtin' Once Again by faithmairee |
12-Mar-06/12:03 PM |
Thanks for your comments. Agree...a song is much better with music!
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Re: i prefer steadfast by skaskowski |
12-Mar-06/11:52 AM |
I enjoyed this alot. It was very interesting and had a nice flow to it.
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Re: Goodbye by shadowaura |
19-Dec-04/1:11 AM |
great job...i like this a lot...it's sad but really well written
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Re: Joe likes "DYNAMITE"! by horus8 |
19-Dec-04/1:05 AM |
interesting piece...nice flow and dynamite beat
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Re: Pollution by Firestarter |
18-Dec-04/7:39 PM |
absolutely awesome...i loved this poem
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Re: Ashes, Ashes by Firestarter |
18-Dec-04/7:37 PM |
excellent work...a true masterpiece
faith
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Re: The Bonfire of the Vanities by Firestarter |
18-Dec-04/7:32 PM |
gawd, you're good...this has a great flow to it, is extremely well-written with a very powerful delivery...great poem!
faith
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Re: Nothing Changes by Richard |
18-Dec-04/7:28 PM |
great poem...one of the best i have seen on here so far...
faith
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Re: I Adore by Stacy Stewart |
18-Dec-04/9:49 AM |
intriguing piece...well done
faithmairee
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