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i prefer steadfast (Free verse) by skaskowski rather be a store front when
a storm front shuts it down.
pull in my
pottery;
blue tarp
and sandbag,
bolted to the ground.
let the ocean wrap me up
and rinse away
all my graffiti.
fill all the pots
with salty broth,
sand
bust out
swirling
'round.
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Posted: March 12, 2006 12:24 AM PST; Last modified: March 12, 2006 12:24 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.1788044 Overall Rank: 4890 Comments:
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faithmairee @ 209.240.205.61
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12-Mar-06/11:52 AM
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I enjoyed this alot. It was very interesting and had a nice flow to it.
I love visualizing poems, and this one ain't no exception. It's beautiful.
Very smooth, the title says it all. 'Let the ocean wrap me up and rinse away all my graffiti' - excellent.
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