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i prefer steadfast (Free verse) by skaskowski

rather be a store front when a storm front shuts it down. pull in my pottery; blue tarp and sandbag, bolted to the ground. let the ocean wrap me up and rinse away all my graffiti. fill all the pots with salty broth, sand bust out swirling 'round.

Niphredil 12-Mar-06/12:36 PM
I love visualizing poems, and this one ain't no exception. It's beautiful.




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