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Gone Bad (Lyric) by faithmairee Today, I saw my baby with somebody else.
Yes, I saw my baby with somebody else.
Now here I am crying all by myself.
He said he would keep me in diamonds and furs.
He said he would keep me in diamonds and furs.
Now, may I ask what he's doing with her?
He promised to love me forever more.
He promised to love me forever more.
But he sure don't come around much anymore.
Up the ladder:
The burlesque circus clown [revised]
Down the ladder:
From the despairs
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Posted: March 12, 2006 11:38 AM PST; Last modified: March 12, 2006 11:38 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7828 Comments:
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ecargo @ 63.22.20.183
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12-Mar-06/12:10 PM
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Hee--it's like every blues song ever written condensed into a handful of lines.
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faithmairee @ 209.240.205.63
> ecargo
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12-Mar-06/12:14 PM
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I'm taking that as a compliment...thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my lyric.
Unlike about 95% of the lyrics on this site I actually want to hear this one sung. Same applies to the rest of your lyrics...I never thought I'd say that here!
Thank you for the wonderful compliment! You made my day! I love the blues...particularly chicago and the delta blues!!!
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