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Gone Bad (Lyric) by faithmairee
Today, I saw my baby with somebody else. Yes, I saw my baby with somebody else. Now here I am crying all by myself. He said he would keep me in diamonds and furs. He said he would keep me in diamonds and furs. Now, may I ask what he's doing with her? He promised to love me forever more. He promised to love me forever more. But he sure don't come around much anymore.

Up the ladder: Best Friends
Down the ladder: How To Fish

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7767
Posted: March 12, 2006 11:38 AM PST; Last modified: March 12, 2006 11:38 AM PST
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[7] ecargo @ 63.22.20.183 | 12-Mar-06/12:10 PM | Reply
Hee--it's like every blues song ever written condensed into a handful of lines.
[n/a] faithmairee @ 209.240.205.63 > ecargo | 12-Mar-06/12:14 PM | Reply
I'm taking that as a compliment...thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my lyric.
[8] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 12-Mar-06/12:31 PM | Reply
Unlike about 95% of the lyrics on this site I actually want to hear this one sung. Same applies to the rest of your lyrics...I never thought I'd say that here!
[n/a] faithmairee @ 209.240.205.63 > Ranger | 12-Mar-06/12:38 PM | Reply
Thank you for the wonderful compliment! You made my day! I love the blues...particularly chicago and the delta blues!!!
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