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Free verse № 88582

What I Wouldn't Give

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Feb 2004 · 1 comment

What I wouldn't give, to hold you once more, Id love you like never before, What I wouldn't give, to just look in those eyes, Cause there I would see, an angel in disguise, What I wouldn't give, to just hear you say, Stay with me, and never go away, What I wouldn't give, to get inside your heart, And there forever be a part, what I wouldn't give, To feel your heart, beat against mine, If only at that moment, I could stop time, What I wouldn't give, to look in my mirror and see, You staring back at me, what I wouldn't give, To go back to the day, When I had you with me, in every way, What I wouldn't give, to have had the wisdom to realize, All I needed, was right before my eyes, What I wouldn't give, to give all I have away, Just to have you, for one more day!

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[8] plinkyponk 13-Feb-04/3:31 PM Reply
if you lose the exclamation at the end it will have more impact i