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1-Oct-02/9:23 AM |
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I'm sorry that things had gone so bad for you but I hope now that they are better... excellent write! :o)
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| Re: The Phoebe Snow by horus8 |
2-Oct-02/1:04 PM |
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Woah... this is trippy horus... IIIII like it :o) 10 for ya!
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7-Oct-02/1:24 PM |
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oh, how I know that feeling too well... finding solace in the dark shadows... great poem Katie :o)
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| Re: Midnight Dream by Katie |
7-Oct-02/1:32 PM |
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I liked how you described each moment... each moment of your sensual dream, brought upon the computer screen... good read Katie :O)
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| Re: Snow-White by vulcan |
14-Oct-02/9:11 AM |
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such sorrow in your words... good read vulcan :o)
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14-Oct-02/9:51 AM |
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I agree with this write on many aspects... many times I've been given comments that told me that I should give up, because I lack any ability to write... but there are some who try to help... to help make me a better writer rather than say "give up". It's better to try to help someone rather than hurt them. A philosophy I try to live by and I'm glad to see others do the same...
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| Re: ~*Broken Soul*~ by Katie |
17-Oct-02/6:34 AM |
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to search for the one true love. Don'w worry Katie... you'll find him :o) Good poem!
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| Re: Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT |
17-Oct-02/7:33 AM |
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This sounds so familiar... a crook with a smile on his face, saying how great this is and how stupid you'd be without it... great read :o)
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17-Oct-02/8:05 AM |
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| Re: flight by soccer23 |
17-Oct-02/8:38 AM |
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interesting read soccer :o)
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17-Oct-02/8:44 AM |
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such pain you speak of god'swife... I pray the storms of sorrow have passed you by... excellent read!
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| Re: The Way It Is by Tascobar |
17-Oct-02/8:48 AM |
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yeah... everyone picks on the fat kid and I don't know why... somebody should teach that kid how to fight back :o)
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| Re: Sniper by nightii |
21-Oct-02/8:17 AM |
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the poem speaks truth... fear seems to have gripped the areas surrounding these attacks. But, people shouldn't be afraid of this poor excuse for a human being. I live in Richmond... but I'm not afraid... I wouldn't give that p**k the satisfaction :o)
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| Re: Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl |
25-Oct-02/9:25 AM |
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This was a good read... I'm sorry that your father was taken from you too soon. Please don't listen to these people... but know that your father is still with you... in your thoughts and in your heart... you'll see him again one day :o)
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28-Oct-02/9:21 AM |
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words cannot describe... beautiful poem :o)
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| Re: Hells Game by Katie |
5-Nov-02/7:31 AM |
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I don't know what to say about this one except wow... great read! :o)
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5-Nov-02/7:34 AM |
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I wish I could say what I felt when I read this poem... damn cold... but I loved it... great poem :O)
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| Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
23-Mar-03/11:43 PM |
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Interesting work my good man, except for the list of your likely candidates. But, I'm surprised that after the months since I've last posted, people still remember me. Damn, did my poetry stink that bad?? If so, I can only say but one thing... F**K it. Have a nice day all :)
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| Re: Life begins when you graduate H.S. by INTRANSIT |
4-Jun-03/1:20 PM |
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| Re: To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jun-03/1:22 PM |
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I understand what you mean with this... good read
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