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Sniper (Free verse) by nightii Trouble in the Capital
Don't dare stop for gas
Sniper's in the bushes
gonna shoot your little ass.
Cops are searchin' high and low
Police Chief feeling vexed
Kids afraid to go to school
Worried they'll be next.
Roadblocks on the highways
Stopping every van
Sniper's lining up his shot,
Hit the head again.
Up the ladder:
Dying for a Dowry
Down the ladder:
Jesus was the Antichrist
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Posted: October 20, 2002 5:45 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2002 5:45 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2 Overall Rank: 4549 Comments:
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Tintagiles @ 207.179.185.202
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20-Oct-02/6:12 PM
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It's a bad poem, but at least you don't scream about this sniper character being a coward who knows justice will catch him. You get some points for that. Some. How much do we bet it's a CIA agent doing some after-hours practice?
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Frass @ 151.200.149.213
> Tintagiles
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20-Oct-02/7:24 PM
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I invite both of you to buy gas with me at the Manassas Sunoco; I'll stay in the car.
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Christof @ 195.172.133.226
> Frass
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21-Oct-02/6:01 AM
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Suddenly I'm very glad not to be in Washington DC. Or Maryland. Or Virginia. May Chief Moose (who has the best cop's name ever) be successful soon.
Never-the-less, living in the neighbourhood can't be much fun just at the moment.
sharp shooting!
the poem speaks truth... fear seems to have gripped the areas surrounding these attacks. But, people shouldn't be afraid of this poor excuse for a human being. I live in Richmond... but I'm not afraid... I wouldn't give that p**k the satisfaction :o)
Damn, LS29! Sounds to me as if your pain is fading. This is good.
We need all the positivity we can get aroud here right now.
it's long since been faded my friend... but for now, I try to be strong for loved ones who need strength during this dark time :o)
I hear the Richmond cops are detaining two guys, today; hope it's them. If so, I'll come down to Richbrau to hoist some tall ones with you LS29. Write on.
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