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Sniper (Free verse) by nightii

Trouble in the Capital Don't dare stop for gas Sniper's in the bushes gonna shoot your little ass. Cops are searchin' high and low Police Chief feeling vexed Kids afraid to go to school Worried they'll be next. Roadblocks on the highways Stopping every van Sniper's lining up his shot, Hit the head again.

Tintagiles 20-Oct-02/6:12 PM
It's a bad poem, but at least you don't scream about this sniper character being a coward who knows justice will catch him. You get some points for that. Some. How much do we bet it's a CIA agent doing some after-hours practice?




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