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Sniper (Free verse) by nightii

Trouble in the Capital Don't dare stop for gas Sniper's in the bushes gonna shoot your little ass. Cops are searchin' high and low Police Chief feeling vexed Kids afraid to go to school Worried they'll be next. Roadblocks on the highways Stopping every van Sniper's lining up his shot, Hit the head again.

INTRANSIT 21-Oct-02/8:31 AM
Damn, LS29! Sounds to me as if your pain is fading. This is good.
We need all the positivity we can get aroud here right now.




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