Re: The huntsman's secret by Stephen Robins	5-Oct-04/5:25 PM
Was surfing through your poems....and this one i really liked...
Re: Fool by arduinn	5-Oct-04/5:14 PM
this could be a really intense poem if you did expand on it...( gosh I hate giving advice)....lots of emotions left unsaid here I think....
Re: ONCE by jroday	23-Sep-04/5:06 PM
Short, sweet, sentimental...and I like that in a poem...I am not the best poet around, I just write what comes to mind....edit when I need to and delete too lol...it all comes with practice...not a one of us are perfect....poetry all means something different to each of us...and as far as rhyming goes, a poem doesn't always have to rhyme....
Re: I MISS YOU by jroday	23-Sep-04/4:58 PM
This is a beautiful poem...I had lost my Father 12 years ago....not the same as a Mother's love....but it is a horrible loss just the same...my heart goes out to you and thank you for commenting on a couple of my poems ( and you are so right about the comments you left)
Re: Little Dreamer by TLRufener	22-Sep-04/3:32 PM
I love this poem....it offers inspiration to many of us...the heart always does know and we can really fly...
Re: Down Memory Lane by darylchew	22-Sep-04/3:22 PM
This is great...this last Summer I actually saw an ice cream truck and his little bell was ringing lol I wanted to run after him....ahhh the good ole days....nothing will ever compare to them....definately this poem brought back memories so it is a 10....
Re: THE GAME by jroday	20-Sep-04/7:28 PM
I think it's good lol made me laugh...
Re: Old Friends by sliver	20-Sep-04/2:10 PM
I thought this poem was absolutely great!
Re: untitled by AM I EVIL?	20-Sep-04/9:56 AM
This is a poem I think a lot can relate to...lots of us are unsure of our thoughts at one point in our lives...this one I liked too...
Re: FALLING ASLEEP by AM I EVIL?	20-Sep-04/9:54 AM
This is a good poem, I really did like it it's a sad poem...because the last line tells us that the person is gone....a lot more could be added to the poem emotionally if you worked on this one....but it is still very good....( I hope you didn' t mind me giving advise, not the best at it...)
Re: crash&burn by AM I EVIL?	18-Sep-04/7:50 PM
You leave the reader anxious to find out the outcome...lots of mystery in your poems...this one I liked too....
Re: the thrill to kill by AM I EVIL?	18-Sep-04/7:48 PM
Actually, it is really good..this sounds like it could actually become a song....very powerful this poem is....
Re: Stirrings by dougsoderstrom	17-Sep-04/2:16 PM
This poem is great...I am always "soul searching"...well written I think....