on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2004, 1:41 PM
This is an excellent poem!!! There is also a lot of emotion in this poem as well....I loved the last line..." I'll send you to your grave with the curse of my silver thorn"....great job!
on Little Dreamer by TLRufener
22 Sep 2004, 3:32 PM
I love this poem....it offers inspiration to many of us...the heart always does know and we can really fly...
on Stirrings by dougsoderstrom
17 Sep 2004, 2:16 PM
This poem is great...I am always "soul searching"...well written I think....
on some deleted poem
18 Sep 2004, 7:45 PM
I loved this poem! Heartfelt and right to the point...honest, sincere and very direct are the emotions I felt in this poem....well written...
on the thrill to kill by AM I EVIL?
18 Sep 2004, 7:48 PM
Actually, it is really good..this sounds like it could actually become a song....very powerful this poem is....
on crash&burn by AM I EVIL?
18 Sep 2004, 7:50 PM
You leave the reader anxious to find out the outcome...lots of mystery in your poems...this one I liked too....
on FALLING ASLEEP by AM I EVIL?
20 Sep 2004, 9:54 AM
This is a good poem, I really did like it it's a sad poem...because the last line tells us that the person is gone....a lot more could be added to the poem emotionally if you worked on this one....but it is still very good....( I hope you didn' t mind me giving advise, not the best at it...)
on untitled by AM I EVIL?
20 Sep 2004, 9:56 AM
This is a poem I think a lot can relate to...lots of us are unsure of our thoughts at one point in our lives...this one I liked too...
on Old Friends by sliver
20 Sep 2004, 2:10 PM
I thought this poem was absolutely great!
on some deleted poem
20 Sep 2004, 2:15 PM
ohhhhhh a hard lesson to learn...a powerful poem here....
on some deleted poem
20 Sep 2004, 7:23 PM
This is beautiful...I think it's more sensous than erotic...and moreso romantic...good job in writing this!
on Down Memory Lane by darylchew
22 Sep 2004, 3:22 PM
This is great...this last Summer I actually saw an ice cream truck and his little bell was ringing lol I wanted to run after him....ahhh the good ole days....nothing will ever compare to them....definately this poem brought back memories so it is a 10....
on some deleted poem
22 Sep 2004, 3:34 PM
An intense poem...one I can honestly relate to...the pressures of life sometimes can become over bearing...
on I MISS YOU by jroday
23 Sep 2004, 4:58 PM
This is a beautiful poem...I had lost my Father 12 years ago....not the same as a Mother's love....but it is a horrible loss just the same...my heart goes out to you and thank you for commenting on a couple of my poems ( and you are so right about the comments you left)
Short, sweet, sentimental...and I like that in a poem...I am not the best poet around, I just write what comes to mind....edit when I need to and delete too lol...it all comes with practice...not a one of us are perfect....poetry all means something different to each of us...and as far as rhyming goes, a poem doesn't always have to rhyme....
on some deleted poem
5 Oct 2004, 5:11 PM
what an emotional poem....right now...at this point in my life...I too, wish to remain unsettled...definately a 10 here....
on some deleted poem
5 Oct 2004, 5:17 PM
regardless of their comments....I think it's an excellent poem!
on The huntsman's secret by Stephen Robins
5 Oct 2004, 5:25 PM
Was surfing through your poems....and this one i really liked...