| Re: Dare by LintyWeenis |
8-Sep-04/4:42 PM |
Why is she/he screaming your name?
Is it the danger or the size of your penis?
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| Re: Forever Lasting by ChefKSP |
8-Sep-04/4:37 PM |
I found the hidden message!Is it you markedly suck?
Stick to cooking Chef KSP!
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| Re: Love by ChefKSP |
8-Sep-04/4:32 PM |
You'll never be talented,
You'll always ramble,
You'll want to become more than just a moron,
You'll feel better when you quit posting this crap.
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| Re: Lost Soul by ChefKSP |
8-Sep-04/4:26 PM |
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No offence - but please try a different form of expression.Poetry is just not your cup of tea.
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| Re: Friend Ship by ChefKSP |
8-Sep-04/4:22 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Disregardance by klosterfobik |
8-Sep-04/3:30 PM |
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Silent Scream is such an easy oxymoron.
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| Re: a comment on Delicate Was by klosterfobik |
8-Sep-04/3:10 PM |
I know its an adverb but I just thought I'd try it as a noun,like daybreak,red-letter day,bygone or past...
seems more dramatic this way?Or not?
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| Re: a comment on Disregardance by klosterfobik |
8-Sep-04/1:12 PM |
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I could always just self publish like yourself - Or am I mistaken?
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| Re: a comment on Delicate Was by klosterfobik |
8-Sep-04/1:07 PM |
Delicate was refers to a fleeting - fragile memory left behind by a girl in the form of a sweet odor,its delicate because if you tamper with it it will go away.Do you not even appriciate the
the scents of the women you've had?Like their perfume,lotion or shampoo?Sorry if its "cutesy".And as for affection your correct,as for Ben Harper-ish your very wrong.
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| Re: a comment on Delicate Was by klosterfobik |
7-Sep-04/8:04 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Inquietude by klosterfobik |
7-Sep-04/5:49 PM |
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| Re: Let your heart roam free by Leah11 |
2-Sep-04/7:33 PM |
Like the feel and honesty - structure could be better.
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| Re: Swimming in Space & Fishing for the Luridness Monster by SupremeDreamer |
2-Sep-04/6:36 PM |
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| Re: Two Basic Forces by dougsoderstrom |
1-Sep-04/7:38 PM |
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| Re: Andrew by Spindle |
28-Aug-04/9:16 PM |
I look into his eyes and I'm tossed and bound
I bury my face into her breast and want to masterbate and live forever
I kiss her lips and pull away just so I can suck ass again.
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| Re: a comment on Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik |
28-Aug-04/7:39 PM |
Just a grammatical pun - thought it rolled of the tongue quite well.My Grandma's name was Hazel - she was my childhood god.
She loved me so much but I kind of drifted from her.She died before I could tell her how much I cared about her.I did'nt lose
her - she lost me when I ran away.All my fault....that's why I'm sorry.
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| Re: Surfer by INTRANSIT |
28-Aug-04/7:23 PM |
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Thought of back when and salt blue ocean....very nice.
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| Re: Internal Dialogue (Mental Cock-Slapping & Anal Discipline) by DreamerSupreme |
28-Aug-04/7:19 PM |
What is wrong with you?Was this an ode to yourself?
Either way it really - truly sucks!Are you a confused
13 year old who's been molested by a gang of Eagle Scouts?Try something besides poetry for your venting.
Considering this ranting poem,I believe your the mayor
of Dimsville!
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| Re: a comment on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik |
27-Aug-04/10:21 PM |
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I'm sorry that was the best you could do - I forgive you lack of thought.
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| Re: a comment on Penumbra by klosterfobik |
27-Aug-04/10:10 PM |
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Would it really matter if it was a pimple?
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