| Re: a comment on Penumbra by klosterfobik |
27-Aug-04/10:07 PM |
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Spank you Mr.London!I'll send you a new boy when I can.
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| Re: a comment on Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik |
25-Aug-04/9:16 PM |
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I know,I thought they were all kind of the same though - just different names and places?
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| Re: a comment on Penumbra by klosterfobik |
25-Aug-04/9:08 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik |
24-Aug-04/3:40 PM |
Stephen,go back and read your own poems and comments to other's poems and try to realize you are not as witty as you seem to think.As to your "wealth,intelligence and good looks" or lack there of - it probably excludes you from being me - which is human.
PS
I hope your violent fantasies end soon - take your Prozac.
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| Re: a comment on Penumbra by klosterfobik |
24-Aug-04/2:28 PM |
How does this poem imply that I hate people?(or did you forget the definition of misanthrope)?And stultifying perspicacity is a
very milk-fed pedomorphic oxymoron.Why,oh why do Brits still bother to speak - that is redundant - even more so than a mid-month jam rag - you sad little cynic.
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| Re: A Stitch In Time by Dovina |
22-Aug-04/8:52 PM |
You captured a moment of us all.
Very well wrighten.-9-
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| Re: a comment on Navy Pier by Doug |
22-Aug-04/8:44 PM |
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Very soft and complete - almost like I was there. - 9 -
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| Re: a comment on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik |
22-Aug-04/8:16 PM |
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PSS-Leave the sand's of Jordan to the one's who deserve it.
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| Re: a comment on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik |
22-Aug-04/7:39 PM |
You make a decent point dark one,but literate does not mean those who know how to puncuate,it means - literally one who knows
how to read and write or educated in a particular field or one who is literary or well written.So before you spew your ignorant opinion try to understand that others wright their deep - true emotions first and then think about puncuation.I'll agree I'm very lacking when it comes to grammar and puncuation,but I have studied and love the written
word and is that not what matters most?Is poetry not grace,beauty and harmony?Would an unaccomplished Van Gough's brush stroke be less artistic?Would truth be false if it was not puncuated properly?Accidence lives far past our renovation.
And as to wallyish - sorry about your luck and life.
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| Re: The 80's by wilco |
21-Aug-04/11:10 PM |
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I like the thought behind the lyrics - very nostalgic,yet depressing in a certain way.
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| Re: a comment on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik |
20-Aug-04/10:15 PM |
No, I think punctuation is used by talentless grammar snobs to make them seem more literate(at least on this site).Its the technicality of punctuation that makes it artless, not the fact that it clarifies - clarification is the whole point of punctuation you freakin' moron!Instead of trying to defend your lack of thought, you might consider doing something about it.
Like,I don't know, maybe learning how to express yourself.
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| Re: a comment on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik |
18-Aug-04/6:47 PM |
Punctuation is for the artless - regret is for the dieing - continuity is for the longing and intensity is for the soul.
I thank you for your observation and thought,and I will amend this feeling/poem the best I can.
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| Re: I Can't Move On by Sirens_Voice |
15-Aug-04/4:39 PM |
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the ending is good - try a little amending though. -8-
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| Re: The Grand Adjustment by horus8 |
15-Aug-04/6:26 AM |
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| Re: Navy Pier by Doug |
11-Aug-04/8:42 PM |
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Were you afraid to fall in love with a girl unworthy?
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| Re: a comment on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik |
11-Aug-04/8:27 PM |
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And by the way - your from the suburbs are'nt you?
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| Re: a comment on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik |
11-Aug-04/8:24 PM |
You know - the newness of a relationship,before you screw it up
with words or actions - the start of love is always the sweetest
part you remember.A young faultless couple ...an ideal.
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| Re: a comment on Punk Rock Christmas by unknown^user |
11-Aug-04/7:59 PM |
What the hell is a clarkie?Can you smoke ecstacy?I usaully stick
it up my anus and let it disolve right into my bloodstream.Oh by the way your poem was'nt bad or really good either but still better than godswife's best. -7-
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