Poemranker [Poem: Andrew] [by Spindle] Thu Nov 21 10:24:07 PST 2024

Andrew (Free verse) by Spindle

I look into his eyes and I'm lost and found I bury my face into his chest and want to sufficate and live forever I kiss his lips and I pull away just so I can kiss him again

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Up the ladder: a fresh start

Down the ladder: To A Debaucherous Lover

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10076

Posted: August 28, 2004 6:45 PM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2004 6:45 PM PDT
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[3] klosterfobik @ 205.188.116.140 | 28-Aug-04/9:16 PM | Reply

I look into his eyes and I'm tossed and bound
I bury my face into her breast and want to masterbate and live forever
I kiss her lips and pull away just so I can suck ass again.

[5] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 29-Aug-04/9:04 AM | Reply

Too much cliche.

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