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Andrew (Free verse) by Spindle

I look into his eyes and I'm lost and found I bury my face into his chest and want to sufficate and live forever I kiss his lips and I pull away just so I can kiss him again

Dovina 29-Aug-04/9:04 AM
Too much cliche.




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