Re: Stars Of The Sky by GTK	15-Nov-02/2:44 AM
it's nice.one likes to recite it on some occasions.7
Re: An Exercise in Futility by loneshadow29	15-Nov-02/2:42 AM
I think if you use past tense(fighted/proved)the sense of nothingness will become more oppressing in the poem.
Re: An Exercise in Futility by loneshadow29	15-Nov-02/2:40 AM
very much like "sanity's defeat".but I guess there's no more a "one day".it's for that 'he's tombstone.7
Re: The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss	15-Nov-02/2:33 AM
nice!8
Re: The Funnyman by Christof	10-Nov-02/11:09 PM
It's mighty good.yours be the holy laurel bough!100
Re: Something Must Be by Birdman42s	3-Nov-02/7:47 AM
yes something must be I knew.nice
Re: Down Again by Birdman42s	3-Nov-02/12:28 AM
great!impressive very!
Re: a comment on Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan	28-Oct-02/8:03 AM
Thanks
Re: Living Conditions by Christof	27-Oct-02/12:48 AM
Great!10
Re: a comment on On the Swings by Christof	18-Oct-02/9:05 AM
I've sent you something.you may recieve it maybe not immediately!I hope you enjoy it.
Re: a comment on On the Swings by Christof	18-Oct-02/8:48 AM
yes!thank you!but that swelling nose is bitter ironic!
Re: a comment on On the Swings by Christof	18-Oct-02/8:41 AM
Sorry!I do it immediately!will you tell me what exactly was wrong with"Snow-White"?
Re: On the Swings by Christof	18-Oct-02/8:36 AM
10!
Re: a comment on Snow-White by vulcan	18-Oct-02/8:25 AM
Thanks for the comments Christof!yes mental and physical loneliness!a deranged moment in a distorted image of self.
Re: Warmth Amidst Winter by loneshadow29	14-Oct-02/8:50 AM
nice!7
Re: a comment on Snow-White by vulcan	14-Oct-02/8:33 AM
Think please of the Unsound murmur and a man who Thinks is walking by his Soul and ends in a murmur (a mortal murmur)that says quite the reverse
Re: Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-02/1:56 AM
beautiful!9
Re: a comment on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof	8-Oct-02/5:43 AM
His use of color is enrapturing!
Re: a comment on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof	8-Oct-02/5:42 AM
yes,I suppose!'m happy it was fesh to your eyes
Re: Weep for Dead Heroes by Tascobar	8-Oct-02/5:15 AM
good!5(for I don't consider rock stars as heroes!but the poem is good otherwise!)