on Stars Of The Sky by GTK
15 Nov 2002, 2:44 AM
it's nice.one likes to recite it on some occasions.7
on An Exercise in Futility by loneshadow29
15 Nov 2002, 2:42 AM
I think if you use past tense(fighted/proved)the sense of nothingness will become more oppressing in the poem.
on An Exercise in Futility by loneshadow29
15 Nov 2002, 2:40 AM
very much like "sanity's defeat".but I guess there's no more a "one day".it's for that 'he's tombstone.7
on The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss
15 Nov 2002, 2:33 AM
nice!8
on The Funnyman by Christof
10 Nov 2002, 11:09 PM
It's mighty good.yours be the holy laurel bough!100
on Something Must Be by Birdman42s
3 Nov 2002, 7:47 AM
yes something must be I knew.nice
on Down Again by Birdman42s
3 Nov 2002, 12:28 AM
great!impressive very!
replying on Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan
28 Oct 2002, 8:03 AM
Thanks
on Living Conditions by Christof
27 Oct 2002, 12:48 AM
Great!10
replying on On the Swings by Christof
18 Oct 2002, 9:05 AM
I've sent you something.you may recieve it maybe not immediately!I hope you enjoy it.
replying on On the Swings by Christof
18 Oct 2002, 8:48 AM
yes!thank you!but that swelling nose is bitter ironic!
replying on On the Swings by Christof
18 Oct 2002, 8:41 AM
Sorry!I do it immediately!will you tell me what exactly was wrong with"Snow-White"?
on On the Swings by Christof
18 Oct 2002, 8:36 AM
10!
replying on Snow-White by vulcan
18 Oct 2002, 8:25 AM
Thanks for the comments Christof!yes mental and physical loneliness!a deranged moment in a distorted image of self.
on Warmth Amidst Winter by loneshadow29
14 Oct 2002, 8:50 AM
nice!7
replying on Snow-White by vulcan
14 Oct 2002, 8:33 AM
Think please of the Unsound murmur and a man who Thinks is walking by his Soul and ends in a murmur (a mortal murmur)that says quite the reverse
on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT
14 Oct 2002, 1:56 AM
beautiful!9
replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
8 Oct 2002, 5:43 AM
His use of color is enrapturing!
replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
8 Oct 2002, 5:42 AM
yes,I suppose!'m happy it was fesh to your eyes
on Weep for Dead Heroes by Tascobar
8 Oct 2002, 5:15 AM
good!5(for I don't consider rock stars as heroes!but the poem is good otherwise!)