Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	11-Jun-04/9:24 AM
smooth
Re: Wedding Day by Caducus	12-Jun-04/8:51 AM
Brought up nice images when I read this but I have to agree with the things Intransit pointed out...
Re: Love by pshah4life	12-Jun-04/9:16 PM
Too bland for me. Sorry..
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jun-04/8:38 PM
This is so much better..
Re: Old Friends by sliver	17-Jun-04/1:19 AM
Great flow of words..
Re: Deja Vu by Jeremi B. Handrinos	19-Jun-04/6:02 AM
Wicked..
Re: No choice in the matter by cedand1	21-Jun-04/11:33 PM
dude.. you are good. keep it up...
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jun-04/6:22 AM
i get the picture.. good job...
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jun-04/6:52 AM
dun like the title.. but the poem itself is good...
Re: TEENAGERS LIFE by jessicasgurl	24-Jun-04/6:53 AM
i agree with the points you laid out but maybe you can improve on your spelling? the structure wasn't there as well... so...
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jun-04/8:25 AM
i like this... it has style...
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jun-04/8:28 AM
keep writing...
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jun-04/8:32 AM
something i can relate to.. good one here... but like hywel, i feel funny reading triple ryhme...
Re: | Broken Memory | by | Broken |	25-Jun-04/8:48 AM
his lost. think about it.. don't quite like the second and last stanza, though...
Re: Cool In The Army by wilco	25-Jun-04/8:55 AM
=D
Re: Ayudame (Help Me) by | Broken |	27-Jun-04/6:28 AM
first line of second stanza.. i think it shld be 'lied to'... but as i said before... i like it... agree with shin shuu tt the use of said word made it better...
Re: Flower of Lebanon by donmiguel1960	27-Jun-04/6:39 AM
conjured a pretty picture when i read it..
Re: Girlz by liljsmith87	27-Jun-04/6:50 AM
a number of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.. maybe after you edit this and write something better.. i might just change my mind about my vote
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Jul-04/6:29 AM
I like this a great deal.. but in my opinion, stanza 3 leaves a bit to be desired.. bcz i don't quite get what it means..
Re: Love Redefined by Mus Vai	5-Jul-04/4:45 AM
well described.. some of the words are used too many times, though.. that kind of marred the poem in L14, i suggest you change 'striketh my hand' to sth else as 'strike' means 'hit'...