| Re: a comment on My existance by Twisted Wizard |
4-Jan-03/3:11 PM |
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lol, you must understand. Walking around New Orleans all day, coming home, crashing, and waking up at 3 a.m. to write his. No revision, no nothing. So pretty much you see it as how i wrote it. I will be sure to revise it and repost.
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| Re: Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
4-Jan-03/3:02 PM |
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Dude don't listen to assholes on here that don't know a damn thing about good poetry. I feel that if you feel good about what you wrote, it is good work. I honestly don't know why people put zero's for this. Hell, i could write up something on the life of a fucking mayfly and it would get better than that. Keep up the good work, check out some of my older and newer works.
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| Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
3-Jan-03/11:04 PM |
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lol, dude this poem is awesome. Funny as hell i have to say. Although having to deal with your cursed arse, i still think it is pretty cool.
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| Re: Enslaved by Twisted Wizard |
15-Aug-02/10:31 PM |
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thanx alot, i know most of my "writing" isnt that great. (i dont know if i can even call it work). I am going to try harder to work on writing skills and stuff like that and maybe try never before done writing techniques.
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| Re: For my darling Lori by Twisted Wizard |
10-Aug-02/2:31 PM |
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go to hell and fuckin die. Your writing is the epitome of shit if you havent noticed. You wanna know why i dont write about jesus? I would much rather read about him and tell others about him than just simply write about him.
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| Re: Untitled by Twisted Wizard |
8-Aug-02/1:52 AM |
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that is really fuckin sick you know that? What the fuck are you some sort of fuckin racist, divine hater? Just go fuck off and die alright
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| Re: The King's Assassin by Twisted Wizard |
8-Aug-02/1:42 AM |
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so what you're saying is that its good or no?
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| Re: Take Me Away When You're Gone by Twisted Wizard |
16-Jul-02/3:19 PM |
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| Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
14-Jul-02/11:43 PM |
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i do believe he meant -0....thats fucking impossible. Why would someone be so stupid as to make that a rating, you know maybe a -1 or -2 but -0? There is no such thing as a negative number who's value is 0! Therefore i deem that comment suckworthy. Oh and I really hope that you werent referring to lars ulrich.
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| Re: Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
14-Jul-02/11:34 PM |
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contact the f.b.i for what? that is utterly childish i swear
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| Re: Take Me Away When You're Gone by Twisted Wizard |
13-Jul-02/11:16 PM |
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thanx, it is much appreciated that someone thinks good of my works.
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| Re: Searching... by kissmeufool58 |
11-Jul-02/12:09 AM |
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hey, thanx I didn't realize that there was more than one person on here that appreciated my writing. This poem is good in my view. I would say that if it could be made longer and with a little bit of editing it could be really good. Always remember that there is always room for improvement :)
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| Re: Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
10-Jul-02/8:46 PM |
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i'll give it to you on this one, it was funny
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| Re: Jericho by goldfish |
8-Jul-02/2:33 PM |
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simply amazing, nice touch
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| Re: Let's Do a Test by GAC |
8-Jul-02/2:27 PM |
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| Re: Unknown Plains by Twisted Wizard |
7-Jul-02/9:50 PM |
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| Re: Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82 |
9-Jun-02/2:33 PM |
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jesus christ dude, again must you be so criticizing of other people's feelings. You are nothing but a breath of fresh air on this site so i suggest you either stop criticizing or find some place else to get your jollies.....good poem
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| Re: The Haiku by beakism |
9-Jun-02/2:28 PM |
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if i could i would rate this a -10
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| Re: The Cad by beakism |
9-Jun-02/2:27 PM |
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ok this was pretty interesting but really, what are you getting at?
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| Re: To You by Cha no Onna |
4-May-02/7:29 PM |
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