| Re: a comment on A Word by cuddlytiger17 |
11-May-04/3:25 PM |
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I agree with you, many people do write regarding this topic. However, I think an 8 is pretty good lol so thank you!
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| Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17 |
11-May-04/2:14 PM |
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Thank you sweety. I don't know for sure about you or anyone else, but I don't believe "lost love" is just a "teen" experience. Everyone has felt it, and everyone will feel it. You seem to understand that too. Thank you for the suggestions too, I appreciate it!!
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| Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17 |
11-May-04/2:10 PM |
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I write about what i feel, and in my "teen" years, this IS what i feel. I'm not going to write about something that I don't have any passion for in order to achieve others approval. Love is what is most important to me, and in my eyes, poetry is one's emotions. I don't use poetry to try to impress someone, I use it to express what I feel. If you don't like what I write, then don't read it. If other people feel the same as you, then so be it. But this is how I feel, and that's what matters to me.
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| Re: Karma by blankel |
10-May-04/1:34 PM |
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I REALLY like this poem!!! I don't care what anyone else says, You've got it together! LOL theres no need to say anything else!
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| Re: no name by ~ska~ |
10-May-04/1:27 PM |
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I don't know, certain parts just don't seem to fit together right...It seems like you tried a little too hard or something...
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| Re: Mislead by PK |
10-May-04/1:25 PM |
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You have so much emotion into this, it really grabs the readers attention. I like it a lot!!!
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| Re: blink by VorioBuche |
10-May-04/1:23 PM |
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I admire you for your blunt wording. You say what you mean without holding back. Everything flows so smoothly, its a real piece of work. Congrats!
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| Re: I'm not afraid to admit that I am attracted to Robe Lowe by RO-B-LOWE ME PLEASE |
10-May-04/1:20 PM |
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| Re: Despair by Caducus |
10-May-04/1:19 PM |
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Awww, i feel so much sympathy for the speaker...I can relate on many levels and this is such a sincere poem. The only critcism i have is that a few lines i stumbled over, they didn't flow as smoothly. Otherwise, I commend you on this.
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| Re: Graffito Murder by Don-Quixote |
10-May-04/1:11 PM |
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| Re: A Portrait of Antonio Machado (Edit) by Sasha |
10-May-04/1:07 PM |
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This is a really good poem but unfortunately I have a very short attention span...
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| Re: An Angel's Caress by Southern_Bell |
10-May-04/1:05 PM |
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This poem is so beautiful!! I just wanted to cry! I could picture everything and it felt so real...*sighs* You have some talent!
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| Re: THE 7315 by Garrett S Sexton |
10-May-04/1:03 PM |
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What is this? I'm confused...:/
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| Re: To PinkBunnyofDoom by Vanity |
10-May-04/1:02 PM |
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I think this poem is far above my comprehension lol, but it seems to be very in-depth and significant.
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| Re: California triolets by zodiac |
10-May-04/12:53 PM |
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Wow, the rhythm and overall composition is amazing! Even if you weren't really reading the words, you fall in love with it just by the way it sounds! Good work!
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