| Re: a comment on Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17 |
21-May-04/6:56 PM |
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Yes, i wrote it last night. Thank you! :)
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| Re: a comment on Just Like Before by cuddlytiger17 |
20-May-04/4:40 PM |
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LMAO nice sliver. too bad i already know how to load black powder :p lol I'm j/p with ya.
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| Re: Just Like Before by cuddlytiger17 |
19-May-04/5:16 PM |
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Thanks guys, but these still aren't new ones. I've been working on a few here and there, but nothing I'm willing to post. I appreciate the encouragement and suggestions, it really does help.
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| Re: a comment on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17 |
15-May-04/6:43 PM |
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dont pity me...its a waste of time, definately not worth it.
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| Re: a comment on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17 |
15-May-04/6:05 PM |
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why are u sorry? u havent done anything...
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| Re: The Precious Thing by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
15-May-04/4:09 PM |
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| Re: scarred by TheVampireLeStan |
15-May-04/3:15 PM |
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I dont know why people are so cruel about topics of this sort, but i feel ur pain...Once u start it never goes away, itll always b there reminding u...
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| Re: a comment on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17 |
15-May-04/2:21 PM |
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thats none of ur business, plz dont mock me...
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| Re: a comment on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17 |
15-May-04/11:37 AM |
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| Re: A heart without keys by sliver |
12-May-04/6:38 PM |
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I love your poetry so much. I'm a romantic and so much of your work just makes me feel all warm and mushy inside lol. This poem blends together so smoothly and creates this wonderful sensation of complete bliss. I love it!
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| Re: a comment on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
12-May-04/6:25 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
12-May-04/6:11 PM |
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I have read some of urs lol...
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| Re: a comment on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
12-May-04/5:53 PM |
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Yes i know, i agree with you nowhereman. I've been working on trying to do so. Thanks for contructive criticism...
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| Re: a comment on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
12-May-04/3:40 PM |
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Umm i dont think an expanded vocabulary would make my poems more suitable for you. More like a demented twist involving shit or some other sick subject you seem to be enthralled with...
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| Re: a comment on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
12-May-04/3:38 PM |
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Thank you, it makes me feel at least a little better to have won your approval lol. :p This one is older than the other ones i have posted on here. None of them are "new" as in i just wrote them the day i posted them, but they're fairly recent. Can i ask what makes this one so different from the others? Why you like this one a lot more than any of the other ones I've posted?
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| Re: To My Love by sliver |
12-May-04/2:14 PM |
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This poem is so beautiful and heart felt...*sighs*
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| Re: Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17 |
12-May-04/1:37 PM |
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Sasha i thank you for respecting my privacy and not giving out my website. I write poems for myself, and i post them on websites for others to apply to their own lives if they wish. I enjoy doing so, I know there are plenty of others who do also. Its as simple as that. Sliver, if you wish to know the address to my website, email me at cuddlytiger17@fastmail.fm and id be more than happy to give it to you.
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| Re: Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17 |
11-May-04/5:27 PM |
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I refuse to argue anymore with any of you. This is all pointless. People's opinions and beliefs differ depending on the person. No one is right or wrong. Sasha I don't know why you're so hung up on trying to bring me down...My goal isn't to try to impress others, I've already stated that. But you can't expect me at 16 to have experienced "all there is" and to have grown enough to "meet your standards" of what a "good" poem is. This arguing is all really childish and thats why I'm at least ending my half of it here.
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| Re: a comment on A Portrait of Antonio Machado (Edit) by Sasha |
11-May-04/4:15 PM |
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OK, i never said your poem was "bad" or that i didn't like it! so why do you have to go all defensive and like paranoid schizo on me? I simply have an attention disorder and i can't keep focused on things for very long. It was in no way a diss towards you or your work, I was just disappointed that i wasn't able to finish reading it. And can i ask why you feel you have to degrade my work? Is it some sort of insecurity or some type of enthrallment you get out of trying to hurt others feelings? I like the way i write, i like chicken soup books, so you can say what you want. Maybe you need to gain some more self confidence because i think its your insecurities that are what's really bothering you...
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| Re: a comment on Leading To Fatality by cuddlytiger17 |
11-May-04/3:30 PM |
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Thank you, and i sure hope so!!! lol.
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