| Re: Bottom by ThoughtfulSoul |
7-Oct-02/8:47 AM |
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You need to punctuate and also it should be 'there are people' in line 2. I really do get the impression of your thoughts echoing around though.
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| Re: a comment on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
7-Oct-02/8:43 AM |
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Certainly, I didn't know you painted as well, that would be really interesting to see how your paintings reflect on your poems.
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| Re: Midnight Dream by Katie |
7-Oct-02/8:38 AM |
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Maybe the Internet is a good place for the imagination to run free? I don't know. But you'd better hope Mum & Dad don't find out. They won't be keen on that kind of imaginative release.
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| Re: The day I told her by dalva |
7-Oct-02/8:36 AM |
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That takes guts... Good luck in the future.
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| Re: Beyond Imagination by vulcan |
7-Oct-02/8:32 AM |
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ACtually the ambiguity is great here, it's hard to get a handle on preicsely what's going on with the 'kitty', and the feeling of loss is somehow reflected in that
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| Re: From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford |
7-Oct-02/8:30 AM |
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By the way, is Unity Mitford the one who went to Germany?
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| Re: From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford |
7-Oct-02/8:30 AM |
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Stay away from the corners! Stay in the middle of the ring...Love as a constant battle. Well, how true.
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| Re: A Musical Dream by vulcan |
7-Oct-02/8:28 AM |
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I don't know much about Verdi, but this captures what impression I do have of it. Mysterious, heavy. Great
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| Re: a comment on Temptation Stings, Midday Nashville by <~> |
7-Oct-02/1:27 AM |
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Absolutely I do. Sorry if I've insulted Tennessee in any way...
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| Re: The Journal by 1Sapphire1 |
4-Oct-02/7:38 AM |
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I like the situation and the heart-break
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| Re: Farewell Song by jaalko |
4-Oct-02/7:32 AM |
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I think you're right, this is by far not the worst thing on poemranker.
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| Re: a comment on Possibilities by Nicholas Jones |
4-Oct-02/7:20 AM |
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Just be very glad my wife isn't around to hear you say that
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| Re: a comment on Possibilities by Nicholas Jones |
4-Oct-02/7:14 AM |
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I love The Office. It is so much like, well, my office. I never really watch League of Gentleman because my wife is so mortally afraid of Papa Lazarou. She didn't sleep for a whole night after that episode.
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| Re: a comment on Possibilities by Nicholas Jones |
4-Oct-02/7:09 AM |
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I feel the same way about Slough - the largest light industrial estate in Europe, no less. And the Mars Bar factory. And Willima Herschel discovered uranus while living there. And, and, and The Office is based there. And that's it.
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| Re: Truths by Nicholas Jones |
4-Oct-02/7:08 AM |
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| Re: Truths by Nicholas Jones |
4-Oct-02/7:07 AM |
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Very good - the dilemma of the socialist faced with New Labour. What a middle-class and furtive party it is now. Which is why I always vote Liberal Democrat - as if that's any great alternative.
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| Re: Possibilities by Nicholas Jones |
4-Oct-02/7:05 AM |
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The proverbial embarrassment of riches. I'd start with Stockport.
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| Re: a comment on Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones |
4-Oct-02/7:04 AM |
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Yes that does tend to put you off. They all merge into one after a while. Oh the years of trauma....
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| Re: Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones |
4-Oct-02/7:01 AM |
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Yes that is better - tighter.
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| Re: Sonnet For a Porn Star by mikejedw |
4-Oct-02/5:23 AM |
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I think the third quatrain lets this poem down a bit; it seems to reduce rather than express her pain. But the couplet is a killer. Well done.
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