thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Mixed Messages by Miggy
8 Apr 2005, 2:47 AM
S2 L1 Thought?
What about the revised version?
If there were a God, my only prayer every day would be that He not consider what nitwits like you want. For every one of your prayers, I offer...the anti-prayer.
what a load of shit.
I giant, malodorous dumpling, the likes of which I have rarely seen. It is marvelous.
Please wipe, or otherwise de-guff, your hooves before clopping onto the ranker.
I actually was deliberately trying to make that stanza sound somewhat bad. Each stanza is suppose to be a part of the mix tape and/or a commentary. That was supposed to be representative of the "hackneyed ballads" that are honest, but somewhat pathetic. I probably could have made that clearer.
No very well put together, not clear, chiches, and the repetition doesn't help.
and a hell of a time trying to decipher your words. You have too many of them here and no very well put together.
Nobodies are sad. You probably didn't mean that, but it's good.
The last verse doesn't fit - it would have to deal with shame to fit. then -> than.
You are at your best when you do the buffalo and asphalt. When you do the political "without delay" just to rhyme with "play," well, stick with the buffalo.
May I suggest that this page has become tangled with long threads entwining of comments. If anyone wishes to continue any of these discussions, perhaps they should do so on one my other poems.
If I come to believe that, I will not likely begin a terrible life, but rather be too bored to care. :)
I suggest you may be right, but it is fun to speculate.
and you are going to have a terrible life if you believe when people argue with you it is because they hate you :(
I suggest you are thinking of someone else.
And I do appreciate your not doing that.
To justly evaluate a life and thereby judge its value or worth is the thing Iâm trying to get at. Nobody does it right in the angst of suicide. The method Iâm proposing isnât very logical, and your complaint about it in your PS is valid, but itâs easy to do. And it turns out, quite interesting in my case. You simply write a quick list of ten Moments, taking no more than five minutes. Then put a + beside the wonderful Moments and a (â) beside the horrible ones. (A Moment cannot be mundane or you would not remember it as important.) Then do the math. Iâd be interested in seeing the averages.