Re: JUST A FEW by rbooey	Dovina 69.175.32.185	8-Jul-05/9:05 PM
I thought I knew who MUM was until the end. Weird.
Re: a comment on upon driving through rural Washington by david	david 24.85.155.58	8-Jul-05/8:54 PM
Zing!
Re: a comment on "The Buick", or, "to my grandfather" by david	david 24.85.155.58	8-Jul-05/8:48 PM
Tremendously flattering comments. Thank you.
Re: a comment on Pandemic’s Here Again by Lenore	Dovina 69.175.32.185	8-Jul-05/1:49 PM
Interesting.
Re: a comment on Pandemic’s Here Again by Lenore	Lenore 64.252.101.156	8-Jul-05/1:02 PM
FYI http://www.recombinomics.com/whats_new.html
Re: a comment on Almost Persuaded by Dovina	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	8-Jul-05/11:18 AM
I can totally see that.
Re: a comment on Almost Persuaded by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	8-Jul-05/11:10 AM
It's not political, except as belief in a higher power is. The vagueness is intentional, because the narator is questioning his beliefs, wondering if something more is in charge.
Re: a comment on Almost Persuaded by Dovina	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	8-Jul-05/11:05 AM
it feels political. it’s vague. I like vague shit I’m the king of vagueness. the last word reprehensible. it feel like. what we don’t know wont hurt us but it’s bad. like the means justify the ends.
Re: a comment on Pandemic’s Here Again by Lenore	Dovina 69.175.32.185	8-Jul-05/10:59 AM
Then pandemic is not here yet, and the first line needs help.
Re: a comment on Pandemic’s Here Again by Lenore	Lenore 64.252.101.156	8-Jul-05/10:54 AM
Avian Flu. H5N1
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	Lenore 64.252.101.156	8-Jul-05/10:47 AM
It’s strange but I feel guilty. The kind of guilt one might feel after reading someone’s diary. This work is so personal, so strong. It should be rolled up and tied up with the small red string that she left for you in that box. There’s more to say but I can’t. Thank You.
Re: A World At War by Damien	Dovina 69.175.32.185	8-Jul-05/10:30 AM
Too many words, and not carefully chosen. "safely wallowing in safety" for example.
Re: a comment on Almost Persuaded by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	8-Jul-05/10:27 AM
Then what do you think it's about, if not sex?
Re: Lover by Dental Panic	Dovina 69.175.32.185	8-Jul-05/10:26 AM
Why continue in verse 3 with the bus? It seems to cloud a good start. And the break between verses 1 and 2 seems wrong.
Re: sprung by <~>	Dovina 69.175.32.185	8-Jul-05/10:22 AM
"the sorrow of an uncaged regret" good line. But to spring aloft on the wings of others with uncaged regrets seems counter to your theme, though quite poetic.
Re: a comment on Almost Persuaded by Dovina	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	8-Jul-05/10:21 AM
I knew as soon as I clicked. that sentence was wrong. I know you’re deeper then that. and I’m not consumed with sex.. I like it. but not consumed.
Re: Pandemic’s Here Again by Lenore	Dovina 69.175.32.185	8-Jul-05/10:17 AM
If you refer to the London attacks, there's no need to tell the world; they know. If you mean that the world reacts too slowly, then I say we react fast enough, just with impotence.
Re: a comment on Almost Persuaded by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	8-Jul-05/10:12 AM
Do you infer sexual desire even in this? Is everything you read a symbol of physical placement within some canal – birth or excretion? I’m not angry. It’s just pathetically humorous.
Re: Butterfly Plague by zodiac	Lenore 64.252.101.156	8-Jul-05/8:49 AM
"Here's a naked-necked girl laughing in a square, thumbnail sawing an orange-skin. How grey and soft-bodied, these! " Vivid image. I can smell the tang.
Re: a comment on Our Soldiers by Lenore	Lenore 64.252.101.156	8-Jul-05/8:17 AM
Yes.