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ALChemy on Looking for someone by INTRANSIT 19 Aug 2005, 6:49 AM

Somewhere in a trailer along the backroads of West Virginia a woman eagerly awaits to hear these very words.

ALChemy on Surveyor and Farmer by Dovina 19 Aug 2005, 6:12 AM

I'm not sure what "Small squeeze, a swell." is. I won't tell you what my guess is because it's kinda dirty but if I'm right I'll give you a 10 for the devilish grin you caused. Your on a roll now. Good flow again. Keep that factory in your head goin'.

Bobjim on Fading.+/ by Lindz14 19 Aug 2005, 5:51 AM

This is a most fantastic poem. -8-

Bobjim replying on The burden of faith by Bobjim 19 Aug 2005, 4:24 AM

Touche

Bobjim replying on The burden of faith by Bobjim 19 Aug 2005, 4:18 AM

You're more than welcome. I'm glad the poem meant so much to you, even if it wasn't in the way I intended.

hendrimike on Thoughts by drnick 18 Aug 2005, 7:16 PM

mikey likes it

Bethy replying on The burden of faith by Bobjim 18 Aug 2005, 4:09 PM

My Dad passed away just over a year ago...he was my best friend and my biggest fan :) I veiw my father as the one far above me...he woke every morning and said 'Hello world!...he was a sassy,funny kinda man with an answer for everything...he knew it all... destroy you- with his words of dissapointment bless your work- he prasied me when I did well he was a private man with mysteries that seem to be waiting to roll off his lips...I took care of my Dad for years and nursed him...I was with him when he died...He was God to me...thankyou for asking...you just inspired me to write a poem for him...Thankyou Bobjim...:) :) Bethy

Bethy on Surveyor and Farmer by Dovina 18 Aug 2005, 3:53 PM

I like this one Dovina...secret encounters are fun...lol...:) Bethy

Bethy on Looking for someone by INTRANSIT 18 Aug 2005, 3:50 PM

sounds like me when I think in my car...with no pen...and a poem in my thoughts...lol :) Bethy

Bethy on Playing The Vibes by impert&ent 18 Aug 2005, 3:48 PM

verrrry good...:) Bethy

Bethy on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim 18 Aug 2005, 3:46 PM

Beautiful...gave me goose bumps...it reminds me of someone I know...:) Bethy

Bethy replying on Home by Bethy 18 Aug 2005, 3:43 PM

Yes..I agree...I tried it and it does work..thankyou...variation and changes make things better...:) :) Bethy

Bethy replying on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy 18 Aug 2005, 3:36 PM

Awww shucks...you just made my day Bobjim...Thankyou...:) :) :) Bethy

Bethy replying on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy 18 Aug 2005, 3:34 PM

Thank you Stephen...:) Bethy

woodstock20000 on Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim 18 Aug 2005, 12:31 PM

Bless.

INTRANSIT replying on Words by Dovina 18 Aug 2005, 11:37 AM

word. no, ha! the end of the first line in s-2 I don't think you need it. I used to love block when I was little. still am. still do. Basement full o legos.

INTRANSIT replying on How Angels Sleep by Dovina 18 Aug 2005, 11:32 AM

Submissive was the wrong word. Indirect might be a better word. Nevermind. I read it with VOLUME this time and heard the beat in all stanzas. bravo.

INTRANSIT replying on Looking for someone by INTRANSIT 18 Aug 2005, 11:28 AM

yah. I really wanted this to have more but it came on strong and then petered out on me I hate it when that happens.

Dovina replying on The burden of faith by Bobjim 18 Aug 2005, 10:26 AM

Not necessarily. It depends on what my faith is in.

Dovina on Looking for someone by INTRANSIT 18 Aug 2005, 10:24 AM

How about simply, "A Letter To Anyone"? Or is it to someone? Must be to someone, because there must be some ones you would not want as golden catfish on you arms. I like looking for all our lost pens.