Re: Looking for someone by INTRANSIT	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	19-Aug-05/6:49 AM
Somewhere in a trailer along the backroads of West Virginia a woman eagerly awaits to hear these very words.
Re: Surveyor and Farmer by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	19-Aug-05/6:12 AM
I'm not sure what "Small squeeze, a swell." is. I won't tell you what my guess is because it's kinda dirty but if I'm right I'll give you a 10 for the devilish grin you caused. Your on a roll now. Good flow again. Keep that factory in your head goin'.
Re: Fading.+/ by Lindz14	Bobjim 143.167.134.83	19-Aug-05/5:51 AM
This is a most fantastic poem. -8-
Re: a comment on The burden of faith by Bobjim	Bobjim 143.167.132.18	19-Aug-05/4:24 AM
Touche
Re: a comment on The burden of faith by Bobjim	Bobjim 143.167.132.18	19-Aug-05/4:18 AM
You're more than welcome. I'm glad the poem meant so much to you, even if it wasn't in the way I intended.
Re: Thoughts by drnick	hendrimike 69.253.194.186	18-Aug-05/7:16 PM
mikey likes it
Re: a comment on The burden of faith by Bobjim	Bethy 24.222.32.246	18-Aug-05/4:09 PM
My Dad passed away just over a year ago...he was my best friend and my biggest fan :) I veiw my father as the one far above me...he woke every morning and said 'Hello world!...he was a sassy,funny kinda man with an answer for everything...he knew it all... destroy you- with his words of dissapointment bless your work- he prasied me when I did well he was a private man with mysteries that seem to be waiting to roll off his lips...I took care of my Dad for years and nursed him...I was with him when he died...He was God to me...thankyou for asking...you just inspired me to write a poem for him...Thankyou Bobjim...:) :) Bethy
Re: Surveyor and Farmer by Dovina	Bethy 24.222.32.246	18-Aug-05/3:53 PM
I like this one Dovina...secret encounters are fun...lol...:) Bethy
Re: Looking for someone by INTRANSIT	Bethy 24.222.32.246	18-Aug-05/3:50 PM
sounds like me when I think in my car...with no pen...and a poem in my thoughts...lol :) Bethy
Re: Playing The Vibes by impert&ent	Bethy 24.222.32.246	18-Aug-05/3:48 PM
verrrry good...:) Bethy
Re: Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim	Bethy 24.222.32.246	18-Aug-05/3:46 PM
Beautiful...gave me goose bumps...it reminds me of someone I know...:) Bethy
Re: a comment on Home by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.246	18-Aug-05/3:43 PM
Yes..I agree...I tried it and it does work..thankyou...variation and changes make things better...:) :) Bethy
Re: a comment on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.246	18-Aug-05/3:36 PM
Awww shucks...you just made my day Bobjim...Thankyou...:) :) :) Bethy
Re: a comment on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.246	18-Aug-05/3:34 PM
Thank you Stephen...:) Bethy
Re: Take heart, you are closer than you know by Bobjim	woodstock20000 209.40.29.18	18-Aug-05/12:31 PM
Bless.
Re: a comment on Words by Dovina	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138	18-Aug-05/11:37 AM
word. no, ha! the end of the first line in s-2 I don't think you need it. I used to love block when I was little. still am. still do. Basement full o legos.
Re: a comment on How Angels Sleep by Dovina	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138	18-Aug-05/11:32 AM
Submissive was the wrong word. Indirect might be a better word. Nevermind. I read it with VOLUME this time and heard the beat in all stanzas. bravo.
Re: a comment on Looking for someone by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138	18-Aug-05/11:28 AM
yah. I really wanted this to have more but it came on strong and then petered out on me I hate it when that happens.
Re: a comment on The burden of faith by Bobjim	Dovina 69.175.32.104	18-Aug-05/10:26 AM
Not necessarily. It depends on what my faith is in.
Re: Looking for someone by INTRANSIT	Dovina 69.175.32.104	18-Aug-05/10:24 AM
How about simply, "A Letter To Anyone"? Or is it to someone? Must be to someone, because there must be some ones you would not want as golden catfish on you arms. I like looking for all our lost pens.