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Bethy replying on My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy 5 Sep 2005, 2:47 PM

thank you for your comment, it was very nice of you...:) Bethy

Bethy on Small-town Postal Clerk Considers Inspiration by zodiac 5 Sep 2005, 2:42 PM

each mind on its own patio...good line...:) Bethy

Bethy on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee 5 Sep 2005, 2:38 PM

judgment calls are really hard to make :) Bethy

ay deee on fire has its own logic by impert&ent 5 Sep 2005, 8:03 AM

many a night spent in the good company of fire and beer. bring your friends next time, too. i liked june 11 and quarter past ten in the midst of timeless reflections such as these.

ay deee on 575 by nentwined 5 Sep 2005, 7:59 AM

fuck yeah

ay deee on self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep by nentwined 5 Sep 2005, 7:54 AM

monkey is my cheese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ay deee on this dude is the best by ay deee 5 Sep 2005, 7:46 AM

thank you bethy; i dont know why your comment was deleted, but yes we all know this dude, and may be a bit like him at times...

ay deee on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy 5 Sep 2005, 7:25 AM

that was probably the right thing to do. definitely not the adventurous thing, but probably the right thing. the length of it suits the situation, but i am curious as to what was said for hours on end...

ay deee on My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy 5 Sep 2005, 7:19 AM

i had the gd fortune to own one of my grandfather's old armchairs, it was the best place to be. simple things are good for writing and reading

ay deee replying on lunch by ay deee 5 Sep 2005, 7:17 AM

thank you, i've been thinking about work a lot lately.

zodiac on Baudelaire: The Albatross by Sasha 5 Sep 2005, 5:54 AM

The first line-and-a-half is the best opening I've read recently.

7!3 on My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy 5 Sep 2005, 5:39 AM

lovely...

Bethy on First Love by Dovina 5 Sep 2005, 5:34 AM

I am surely not "winter-broken" either...lol...here in Canada, we have winter and winnnnnter...lol...:) Bethy

Bethy on The Scout by wilco 5 Sep 2005, 5:27 AM

The title doesn't appeal to me, I do like how you used wolves with regards to the hurricane...:) Bethy

Bethy on Dale by INTRANSIT 5 Sep 2005, 5:14 AM

good memories...we all have them, this is what I write about, fic and non-fic...still there all good feelings...someone always laughs, it either reminds people of themselves or someone...this one reminds me of my buddy Ed...and he was a nutbar... still is...thanks for the belly giggles...lol :) Bethy

Bethy on lunch by ay deee 5 Sep 2005, 5:03 AM

I like this, it is just the kind of stuff you hear at lunch...cool :) Bethy

Bethy on 9/5 by cronus 5 Sep 2005, 4:46 AM

a diary, what a fantastic way to feel poetry...:) Bethy

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on The Absense of God by Bluemonkey 5 Sep 2005, 4:26 AM

Yeah well there are hardly any Christians where I live, and we haven't been pulped by any McHurricaines. It's like all those Muslim fundamentalists who believe the Tsunami was a message from God telling the Indonesians not to adopt Western customs, but to remain fully scarfed-up. Of course the message would have been rather more potent had the Tsunami struck the shores of California, where Nudity runs wide-rife, and where a Gentleman cannot walk Five Paces without brushing up against a Gay.

zodiac replying on First Love by Dovina 5 Sep 2005, 3:34 AM

Yes. Dovina wakes up on a winter morning and sees the sunrise and thinks it will stay. The other 5,999,999,999 people on earth wake up and say, Oh, a sunrise, too bad it won't stay. But then, they're not poets. Do you see my point? PS-Yes, I know it's a metaphor. Ibid.

zodiac replying on How Angels Sleep by Dovina 5 Sep 2005, 3:27 AM

I suggest changing to title of the poem to either "How Not-Real Angels Sleep" or "Not How Real Angels Sleep, But How Things that Are Kind Of Like Angels (Or Would Be Like Angels If They Didn't Sleep Differently From Angels) Sleep" to avoid confusing us literal-minded.