| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
Heather Dee 63.17.38.111 |
7-Sep-05/1:14 AM |
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Great poem I love it!!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Heather Dee 63.17.38.111 |
6-Sep-05/11:43 PM |
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I'm sorry how old were you when you wrote this?
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| Re: Calm In The Face Of A Hurricane by scitz |
PodPoet 68.6.188.203 |
6-Sep-05/10:50 PM |
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| Re: Katrina by jessicazee |
PodPoet 68.6.188.203 |
6-Sep-05/10:49 PM |
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Please consider submitting this wonderful poem to http://hellicane.blogspot.com -- poems by, for and about the victims of Hurricane Katrina. Thanks.
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| Re: Calm In The Face Of A Hurricane by scitz |
PodPoet 68.6.188.203 |
6-Sep-05/10:48 PM |
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Please consider submitting this poem to http://hellicane.blogspot. com -- poems by, for and about the victims of Hurricane Katrina. Thanks.
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| Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee |
ay deee 24.255.87.123 |
6-Sep-05/8:27 PM |
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insane? its just a poem.
please explain.
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| Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee |
ay deee 24.255.87.123 |
6-Sep-05/8:26 PM |
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| Re: a comment on this dude is the best by ay deee |
ay deee 24.255.87.123 |
6-Sep-05/8:25 PM |
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| Re: His homage to the sea by Beyond_Dreams |
Crakyamuni 131.252.182.16 |
6-Sep-05/10:55 AM |
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| Re: His homage to the sea by Beyond_Dreams |
Crakyamuni 131.252.182.16 |
6-Sep-05/10:55 AM |
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This reads like some childs diary entry, and it bores the life out of me. I need a nap.
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| Re: Stardust by TLRufener |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
6-Sep-05/10:07 AM |
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And 18345 which doesn't need work. these are good examples of relatively simple rhyme that can easily ratchet up a poem.
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| Re: Stop stalking me, eventually by T. Jonathron Remp |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
6-Sep-05/10:06 AM |
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I f t h e d a m n e d s t an z a s d i d n ' t a l l s a y t h e s a m e t h i n g . . . . . . . basically.
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| Re: Parrallelogram Perry Como by Crakyamuni |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185 |
6-Sep-05/10:05 AM |
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"?in the sea / in the sea" looks like a console query
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| Re: Stardust by TLRufener |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67 |
6-Sep-05/9:59 AM |
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Though it still needs some work, I think you should look at this. jsp id=102847.
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| Re: a comment on Watch where you're swingin' your dipthong, buddy by INTRANSIT |
INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138 |
6-Sep-05/9:39 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Stardust by TLRufener |
TLRufener 140.146.216.76 |
6-Sep-05/6:48 AM |
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I have never heard that song before in my life. Wow.
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| Re: Small-town Postal Clerk Considers Inspiration by zodiac |
Dovina 12.74.103.59 |
6-Sep-05/6:22 AM |
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Some good lines, but as a story, it lacks continuity. The German thing comes too late.
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| Re: a comment on Strength by Dovina |
Dovina 12.74.103.59 |
6-Sep-05/6:17 AM |
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It would necessetate raging if I felt as strongly about it as I think she does. Does that make it more understandable?
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| Re: a comment on Strength by Dovina |
Dovina 12.74.103.59 |
6-Sep-05/6:16 AM |
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Yes, mam, right away. Thanks.
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| Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina |
Dovina 12.74.103.59 |
6-Sep-05/6:14 AM |
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And after all that romping around. I must never have seen winnnnnter.
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