Re: untitled rubiayait 2 by starkfister	wilco 24.92.74.122	24-Oct-05/7:54 PM
whut?
Re: a comment on In my palm by Prince of Void	wilco 24.92.74.122	24-Oct-05/7:52 PM
Come on feel The Lemonheads..
Re: Eternity by Dovina	wilco 24.92.74.122	24-Oct-05/7:25 PM
I think you should have stopped after the location line and it would've been pretty okay, but I think the last half kills it.
Re: Incommunicado blues (fixed, except for Dovina) by zodiac	wilco 24.92.74.122	24-Oct-05/6:57 PM
The falling into religion part is great and I rather like the -ly
Re: fox and hounds by nentwined	Dovina 69.175.32.104	24-Oct-05/1:04 PM
Uncanny, the similarities with "Eclipse" But you have a baboon.
Re: a comment on Incommunicado blues (fixed, except for Dovina) by zodiac	Dovina 69.175.32.104	24-Oct-05/12:48 PM
I shall never become "fixed" or taught, save for taut tied tubes perhaps to save the planet.
Re: a comment on Incommunicado blues (fixed, except for Dovina) by zodiac	Dovina 69.175.32.104	24-Oct-05/12:45 PM
Well that's perfectly clear. A pair of rogue homebodies snuggled up in Muslim Alaska. Or so my magic wand would have it. Happy Ramadan.
Re: Send The Devil... by horus8	<~> 167.206.181.179	24-Oct-05/11:29 AM
it's good to read you again.
Re: Ruins by Caducus	<~> 167.206.181.179	24-Oct-05/11:27 AM
the ending is quite lyrical, cad, but somehow the rest falls short.
Re: Haven by cyan9	<~> 167.206.181.179	24-Oct-05/11:24 AM
i want to feel you from the inside.
Re: Incommunicado blues (fixed, except for Dovina) by zodiac	<~> 167.206.181.179	24-Oct-05/11:23 AM
you nailed it. bravo.
Re: Haven by cyan9	zodiac 217.144.7.195	24-Oct-05/10:33 AM
Wow. This is like a dictionary of creepy words, but formatted by a post-prime Billy Corgan.
Re: Petals by Jeremi B. Handrinos	zodiac 217.144.7.195	24-Oct-05/4:13 AM
"My plight for water" is worth a ten. The rest's an eight.
Re: Send The Devil... by horus8	zodiac 217.144.7.195	24-Oct-05/4:12 AM
Nice.
Re: Ruins by Caducus	zodiac 217.144.7.195	24-Oct-05/4:11 AM
Why sculptured instead of sculpted? As it is you have 'a statue sculptured', a verb which I can only imagine means 'made like a statue'. In other words, making sculpted 'sculptured' adds no meaning at all and eliminates an easy chance to add meaning. On a constructive note, I think it would be helpful for you to add actual, modern details about Rome. Seriously.
Re: Ruins by Caducus	Caducus 172.201.235.165	24-Oct-05/3:26 AM
I dont know about htis one it was written a year ago, you lot decide.
Re: a comment on Marriage by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.83	23-Oct-05/6:57 AM
And what I get is worth the price.
Re: a comment on Slim and Pretty, Or Not by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.83	23-Oct-05/6:55 AM
yeah, ok.
Re: a comment on Slim and Pretty, Or Not by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.83	23-Oct-05/6:54 AM
A good looking man with a bad heart will prefer farsighted women. Not saying you are he, but as a metaphor, it could work that way.
Re: a comment on Marriage by Dovina	zodiac 217.144.7.195	23-Oct-05/5:38 AM
PS-My experience is that people who aren't in relationships talk about what they'll give to a relationship; people who are in relationships talk about what they get from theirs. I think there's hope for you after all.