Re: a comment on Due Consideration by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.19.241	27-Nov-05/5:41 AM
I'd like to see Dovina's Reason cast as sexy protagonist woman and Dovina's Emotion cast as the prude seductee. They end up in a flat in Brooklyn with 2.5 kids and a Hyundai. Nights when Reason's out of town, Emotion still likes to dress in women's clothes and pretend to be "Douvinae", sexy damsel of wildly romantic melodrama.
Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.19.241	27-Nov-05/5:36 AM
Relating the two what? Sometimes, I truly believe you're not trying to make sense. Judges' ruling: Colossally stupid.
Re: Low by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	26-Nov-05/10:08 PM
Just for the record, I absolutely fucking hate this...it's cheezy and cliche...there are a few things I like about it, though..it's something of an experiment.
Re: a comment on The Mask by TLRufener	wilco 24.92.74.122	26-Nov-05/8:32 PM
yep
Re: a comment on Colorbars by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	26-Nov-05/8:28 PM
Well, you've confused me...is it good or is it bad? lol
Re: Colorbars by wilco	Dovina 69.175.32.104	26-Nov-05/8:27 PM
"grey that’s been wearing down his soul" is good. No it's bad. Same for "kiss from old scars and lullabies."
Re: a comment on listen by elderking	Dovina 69.175.32.104	26-Nov-05/8:22 PM
Okay, I'll take that little pipi trip I've been planning for the last hour.
Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	26-Nov-05/8:19 PM
Colossal stupidity is one of those inane terms only someone desperate for a sleeping partner would think of and demonstrate by relating the two.
Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	26-Nov-05/8:18 PM
You really wouldn't want to know what women are thinking, you'd be disgusted. It's the way dogs and cats coexist, except for that elusive bond.
Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	26-Nov-05/8:15 PM
Sorry, I save that sort for you know who. Besides, this started with my appeal for more femininity in the workplace.
Re: The Angry Bush by wilco	Bill Z Bub 69.158.186.75	26-Nov-05/3:06 PM
If I could impeach an angry bush... Love it. 10 for the politics alone.
Re: i dream in nine minute increments by ay deee	Bill Z Bub 69.158.186.75	26-Nov-05/2:43 PM
The third line had me confused, until I finally realized on the fourth read that you meant "an old one-speed". Violent dreams. Guns never appear in my dreams. Instead, people point their fingers and say BANG. Then the bad thing falls over.
Re: a comment on listen by elderking	elderking 209.79.199.40	26-Nov-05/1:53 PM
True enough! Thanks.
Re: a comment on listen by elderking	elderking 209.79.199.40	26-Nov-05/1:52 PM
Thanks!
Re: a comment on listen by elderking	elderking 209.79.199.40	26-Nov-05/1:51 PM
I figured if I was wordy enough, he might "hear" what I was saying. I figured out after awhile he was pretty much "deaf". Thanks for the comment.
Re: a comment on listen by elderking	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	26-Nov-05/11:14 AM
You go girl.
Re: The Mask by TLRufener	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	26-Nov-05/11:12 AM
Did you notice every line in your poem is written as a seperate sentence. Caps at the beginning. MS Word? You need to get personal. Say things that are unique to your situation or perspective. We have no idea who the hell you're talking to. A lover? A friend? A man? A woman? Michael Jackson? Who? Don't try to write a poem for everyone. If you do it will always turn out the same way. Hokey.
Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	26-Nov-05/10:32 AM
You really wouldn't want to know what men are thinking. You'd be disgusted.
Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	26-Nov-05/10:25 AM
That's no surprise. My last girlfriend was 41 remember. I would have hoped for something more along the line of: In 50 years womens thoughts will have turned to how best to prepare the manslave's penis, deep fried or fricasseed.
Re: listen by elderking	Dovina 66.127.145.10	26-Nov-05/9:08 AM
It seems a complicasted way of saying she ignores you.