| Re: .: night owl (2) by elementalidad |
Bethy 165.154.46.167 |
26-Sep-08/5:15 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Bottled Wisdom by Bethy |
Bethy 165.154.46.167 |
26-Sep-08/5:13 PM |
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Thank you Mr. Remp. I was hoping someone would see the true meaning of this poem, and it does not surprise me that it is you. Your intelligence and ability to interpret my poetry means a lot to me.
:) Bethy
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| Re: Babe TRUTH by T. Jonathron Remp |
Bethy 165.154.46.167 |
26-Sep-08/5:02 PM |
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Rich with wisdom indeed! Nature only wants you to replenish its wonders. Too bad everyone doesn't see it this way. One of my favs for sure!
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| Re: Ashes Of Me by Tyler J. Mancini |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.83.157.120 |
26-Sep-08/2:45 PM |
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can we use this at our wedding
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| Re: Bottled Wisdom by Bethy |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.83.157.120 |
26-Sep-08/12:05 PM |
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This is an instruction manual to Life.
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| Re: a comment on Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.83.157.120 |
26-Sep-08/11:52 AM |
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No, you didn't mention that
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| Re: SWF seeks SWM by Bethy |
ThePariahDog 216.242.79.130 |
24-Sep-08/6:59 PM |
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the meeting seems random enough, yet the parameters are established. equal parts hunter and hunted
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| Re: The state of things... by hobojo |
ThePariahDog 216.242.79.130 |
24-Sep-08/6:05 PM |
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sacrifice comes one way or the other. taxation permits representation by either the pallbearers of old regimes or the vanguard of the new
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| Re: a comment on SWF seeks SWM by Bethy |
Bethy 165.154.46.219 |
20-Sep-08/12:11 PM |
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I find the time for sure...you do too...Racist? nope...we are all children of this world. Shoes? I am not a shoe kinda woman, truly I own a few pair, but mostly they consist of flip flops, rubber boots and tasteful sneakers. I have but one very lovely pair of dancing shoes, which also I use for weddings, and funerals. I like to spend my money on male hookers lol wink, just joking. Have a lovely day.
and as for the "W" lets say that it means..."willing"
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| Re: SWF seeks SWM by Bethy |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.78.94.70 |
16-Sep-08/3:36 PM |
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It always amuses me when, in between thinking about shoes, women sometimes find time to write poetry.
Does the W stand for White? If so, isn't that racist?
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| Re: Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.78.94.70 |
16-Sep-08/3:28 PM |
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| Re: The Answer (dating over 40ish) by Bethy |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.78.94.70 |
16-Sep-08/3:24 PM |
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Your use of the word "snatch" lowered the tone rather shockingly... but I do sympathise. Unlike women, men get more attractive as they get older. They become grizzled, bearded warriors with large, masculine bellies which they use to store reserves of nutrients in case there's a war. In fact, the optimum age for a man is whatever age Sean Connery is now. Women reach their peak at 19.
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| Re: Ally McBeal by Pie |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.78.94.70 |
16-Sep-08/3:17 PM |
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AIDS is not suitable subject matter for poetry: I don't know about everyone else, but I want you off this site.
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| Re: Whispers among me by celticskatermatt1 |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.78.94.70 |
16-Sep-08/3:15 PM |
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How did you come up with the idea of putting a line break between "arm stills" and "Past aggressions"? Did you think: if I don't put a line break soon, the line will end up being longer than the other lines, and then my "poem" won't look like a poem at all. Hmm?
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| Re: a comment on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina |
Dovina 75.82.253.189 |
15-Sep-08/4:08 PM |
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Wow, you thought of that old one, and granted, it spares you the paragraph and the ramble. But is there no place in you heart for a fireside chat and the story handed down, the remembrance retold?
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| Re: a comment on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina |
half.italian 66.77.102.10 |
14-Sep-08/9:28 PM |
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| Re: Fan by Nepanthe |
half.italian 98.151.18.37 |
13-Sep-08/10:38 PM |
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I don't understand... yet I like it.
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| Re: .: night owl (1) by elementalidad |
elementalidad 190.154.63.211 |
12-Sep-08/9:52 AM |
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i think i might have too much going on here. Theres an analogy between the hillsides which -- if you;ve seen them -- seem to cover the andes like a blanket. Theres also the ecuadorians shivering, from the cold andean weather - although its on the equator, its friggin cold. Also the people shivering was intended at the time of writing (2006) to symbolize the turbulent times of tumultuous protests over govornmental elections and the TLC (Free Trade Agreement) that the USA had proposed for all of Latin America which generated lots of confusion, especially for the small-time farmers.
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| Re: :: wandering by elementalidad |
Bethy 165.154.46.148 |
12-Sep-08/9:31 AM |
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this is good but I like snowsounds better
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| Re: :: snowsounds by elementalidad |
Bethy 165.154.46.148 |
12-Sep-08/9:27 AM |
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