Re: About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote	some deleted user 68.120.225.169	29-Sep-08/6:10 PM
You depraved hobo; I've been trying to get a hold of you...
Re: a comment on Mountain Fever by Celticai	Celticai 121.222.109.48	29-Sep-08/1:16 PM
If it resonated for you and touched your spirit, I am a very happy person! Thank you.
Re: Anger by Celticai	Celticai 121.222.109.48	29-Sep-08/1:15 PM
Thanks Bethy... this is just one of those poems that gave me an opportunity to express how I was feeling at the time! :)
Re: a comment on Bottled Wisdom by Bethy	Bethy 165.154.46.224	29-Sep-08/10:35 AM
Thank you for your kind words Drummah.
Re: Mountain Fever by Celticai	Bethy 165.154.46.224	29-Sep-08/10:27 AM
perfect! I don't know what to say...I feel like I am sitting on a mountain in Peru. Thank you
Re: Anger by Celticai	Bethy 165.154.46.224	29-Sep-08/10:24 AM
I'd say destructive...if letting the force free...
Re: Rails to Trails by Dovina	Bethy 165.154.46.224	29-Sep-08/10:20 AM
Oh what now does our future hold? When we look into the eyes of the old, our parents knew and now us, not then...will we find out...who, what and when? (something from an old poem I wrote) This is perfectly wonderful Dovina.
Re: night owl (5) by elementalidad	Bethy 165.154.46.224	29-Sep-08/10:14 AM
oh the sweet sound of peace... :)
Re: night owl (4) by elementalidad	elementalidad 190.154.63.211	29-Sep-08/6:38 AM
i suppose i could nip the but, however I think I'd have to either change the tense of "quietly hates" accordingly or insert a forced pause (-) after prays to make sense in english, no? what do you think? lay man prays- quietly hates the next day lay man prays quietly hating the next day
Re: night owl (4) by elementalidad	Dovina 68.183.245.65	28-Sep-08/7:45 PM
you could leave out - but. Makes it more open, seems
Re: freedom for all by ThePariahDog	Celticai 121.222.109.48	28-Sep-08/5:04 PM
your use of similes and metaphors are very poignant!
Re: Whispers among me by celticskatermatt1	Celticai 121.222.109.48	27-Sep-08/9:26 PM
Celtic.. I really enjoyed your poem as it's resonance chimed a similar chord within me. "The Fire" kindling your toes... just a breath of life, heat, flame, desire...enough to keep you from jumping over the edge.
Re: Bottled Wisdom by Bethy	Celticai 121.222.109.48	27-Sep-08/9:23 PM
This poem resonated for me.. I particularly enjoyed the tempo that you have conveyed with your spacing of the text as it conveys the highs and lows of life just as much as the words you have chosen do!
Re: a comment on Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp	Bethy 165.154.46.79	27-Sep-08/9:29 AM
yep...I work in a daycare/and teach adult education, quite a combination huh? none the less, your work is as important as any others...keep making your statements...there are people out here in the barrens of society that understand...
Re: night owl (4) by elementalidad	Bethy 165.154.46.167	26-Sep-08/5:33 PM
very good...I have never really been a big fan of Senryu, however, you make it easy to like.
Re: Pause by Nepanthe	Bethy 165.154.46.167	26-Sep-08/5:27 PM
This is interesting...I just wrote a poem about a message in a bottle. This is the first I viewed your poem. Have you ever looked in the eyes of our elderly? It is amazing what you can see. Perhaps we all should pause...and say "Hello in there" (a quote from John Prine's song called, "Hello in There") Great poem... :) Bethy
Re: night owl (4) by elementalidad	elementalidad 190.154.63.211	26-Sep-08/5:25 PM
bethy, your comment sparked me. thanks.
Re: The state of things... by hobojo	Bethy 165.154.46.167	26-Sep-08/5:20 PM
Most are not willing...reality in words...wonderful
Re: freedom for all by ThePariahDog	Bethy 165.154.46.167	26-Sep-08/5:18 PM
emotional, awakening, real
Re: night owl (3) by elementalidad	Bethy 165.154.46.167	26-Sep-08/5:17 PM
get busy then...can't wait to see more