Re: I, Ann Boleyn by http://mulberryfairy	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Jan-06/8:30 PM
Funny
Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	http://mulberryfairy 64.222.209.137	9-Jan-06/8:13 PM
where is your home? you run up and down the east coast, right?
Re: Reckoning by <~>	http://mulberryfairy 64.222.209.137	9-Jan-06/7:40 PM
powerful and real- I'm totally believing it. I like the lightness and how you play it with the reality that it is serious and painful, too.
Re: Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	Shuushin 65.175.189.204	9-Jan-06/7:39 PM
Quite great, mostly; I could do without "playing" and a few other doubly described words that keep this less poetic while staying poignant - a personal preference only.
Re: Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones	http://mulberryfairy 64.222.209.137	9-Jan-06/7:36 PM
I didn't get this use of "retain" False snow on an allotment to retain, perhaps or to retain warmth sorry for being so traditionalist, but the "+" and the date were eyesores it was good in spite of all that.
Re: Reckoning by <~>	Shuushin 65.175.189.204	9-Jan-06/7:36 PM
Lovely, tastey words prettily played.
Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138	9-Jan-06/7:35 PM
Something like that. i'm home now, out tomorrow :(
Re: [] by Prince of Void	http://mulberryfairy 64.222.209.137	9-Jan-06/7:32 PM
why not spell out p.o.v.- we had to scroll to the right anyway for the honking last line
Re: The Dark Days of Aristotle by somemorepoetry	http://mulberryfairy 64.222.209.137	9-Jan-06/7:26 PM
nice plot twist
Re: Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	http://mulberryfairy 64.222.209.137	9-Jan-06/7:22 PM
2nd to last line- sun's These are excellent. It IS good to be like moss. Are you still in transit? How do you find time to write so much? Do you drive around with a phrase in your head all day until you get to take a break, then scramble to get it on paper?
Re: a comment on floss every day by digipoet	digipoet 71.82.119.230	9-Jan-06/7:20 PM
lol
Re: a comment on floss every day by digipoet	digipoet 71.82.119.230	9-Jan-06/7:19 PM
rest assured the intent is decidedly sarcastic. :) thx for the comment.
Re: a comment on Bloody Stools 'n' Butterflies by EAger to Offend	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Jan-06/7:15 PM
They're not in the same ballgame. I think this one has something to say.
Re: a comment on portrait of powerlessness by digipoet	digipoet 71.82.119.230	9-Jan-06/7:15 PM
hmmm. no i don't maybe I should though I'll check out her poems.
Re: a comment on portrait of powerlessness by digipoet	digipoet 71.82.119.230	9-Jan-06/7:14 PM
yeah it retrospect i agree the last line is kind of pointless...i guess i thought it was needed to emphasize the others actions towards the subject but it is already clear enough. thx.
Re: Cocoon by Caducus	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Jan-06/7:13 PM
You've caped all line beginnings except Line 4. Thirty two should be thirty-two. I like hso hoping/longing in the last few lines.
Re: Reckoning by <~>	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Jan-06/7:07 PM
"I have ifs, and you have me," What a way to live. Yet it's too often true.
Re: Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Jan-06/7:02 PM
Get your grammar somewhere close to common acceptance, and I'll say something about what you said.
Re: [] by Prince of Void	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Jan-06/7:00 PM
I hate all this giddy positive attitude psychology in the face of despair. Can't you just show the empty abomination in everything and the voidness of even thinking of anything as good or bad?
Re: The Dark Days of Aristotle by somemorepoetry	Dovina 69.175.32.104	9-Jan-06/6:49 PM
The world was too populated or Aristotle, and today not populated enough, some say. Think I'll go east, back to the green hills of Tennessee.