Re: A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove	Sheeva 205.213.111.54	18-May-09/8:59 AM
WTF!!!!???????!!!!!!!!!??????? this is oddly both a distrubing and enjoyable poem //.,^
Re: Reaper's Chain by Ladybama9425	Sheeva 205.213.111.54	18-May-09/8:56 AM
Killer dude love i give it a 20!!!
Re: Monkeys by austimb	Sheeva 205.213.111.54	18-May-09/8:54 AM
Love monkeys so this is pretty awesome U should write more!!!!
Re: the day we met by i love my midget	Edna Sweetlove 79.74.97.194	15-May-09/12:38 PM
You should always let a midget know who's boss. Right on.
Re: battle of the sexes by i love my midget	Edna Sweetlove 79.74.97.194	15-May-09/12:37 PM
I have never refused a woman a blowjob (her on me I mean) so I can empathise here.
Re: i carry my midget by i love my midget	Edna Sweetlove 79.74.97.194	15-May-09/12:36 PM
Enchanting! I too have loved a freak and I know just how fond one can grow of an ugly deformed dwarf.
Re: Vampires and sunblock 3000 by SupremeDreamer	Sheeva 205.213.111.54	15-May-09/10:06 AM
Awesome i feel this way every day 20
Re: modern death(Debuffeted) by Crakyamuni	Sheeva 205.213.111.54	15-May-09/10:04 AM
Confusing (VERY)
Re: Unseen Death by Fire_is_cool	Sheeva 205.213.111.54	15-May-09/10:01 AM
Very Good i'd give it 20 It's a lil' broken up if you know wat i mean
Re: Death's Invitation by eliastemplar	Sheeva 205.213.111.54	15-May-09/9:59 AM
Great poem needs more... something?!?!?!?!
Re: death makes me vain! by SweetJuliet10	Sheeva 205.213.111.54	15-May-09/9:58 AM
LOVE this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Re: well, ok, then by malpaso	Sheeva 205.213.111.54	15-May-09/9:56 AM
WTF!!!!????!!!!
Re: Water Music, Revisited by http://mulberryfairy	T. Jonathron Remp 76.192.231.3	12-May-09/3:36 PM
Aphricka is my favourite land aplenty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Re: no title by Dovina	Aetius 66.224.190.206	7-May-09/1:17 PM
On rare occasions, your ability to write almost manages to break through into something you've posted here.
Re: Clinging to....Life? by sliver	http://mulberryfairy 70.16.67.83	5-May-09/7:00 PM
3rd verse is the best. Fourth verse typo "ache"?
Re: Making a Man by Christof	http://mulberryfairy 70.16.67.83	5-May-09/6:58 PM
Beautiful and real. "flute through the easy powder"?
Re: Jasmine by A. Nomaly	http://mulberryfairy 70.16.67.83	5-May-09/6:56 PM
I like the placement of your punctuation- how it makes each phrase part of the line and part of a more complete thought with their different meanings.
Re: disaster in the flesh by Crakyamuni	http://mulberryfairy 70.16.67.83	5-May-09/6:46 PM
Perfect except for the "never, never" repetition, I don't think it needed the clarification about the last juncture/ kiss goodnight thing.
Re: Lament for something or another. by Nicholas Jones	http://mulberryfairy 70.16.67.83	5-May-09/6:41 PM
I agree, I thought?
Re: Javelin Jungle by T. Jonathron Remp	http://mulberryfairy 70.16.67.83	5-May-09/6:39 PM
I loved your wordplay, and am trying to get the movement of your non-sequiturs.