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Water Music, Revisited

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 May 2009 · 1 comment

Follow footpath from airport of white people to comfortable destination of white people in generic suggestion of non-municipality Africa (surprise, looks just like Maine except the crocodile) Slap at massive, missile mosquitoes and dread encroaching dusk irritably toss child crocodile into oncoming traffic feel mildly guilty for child’s resulting decapitation approve of the speed and painlessness of said death wonder if quinine is in order.

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[10] T. Jonathron Remp 12-May-09/3:36 PM Reply
Aphricka is my favourite land aplenty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!