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Water Music, Revisited (Free verse) by http://mulberryfairy
Follow footpath from airport of white people to comfortable destination of white people in generic suggestion of non-municipality Africa (surprise, looks just like Maine except the crocodile) Slap at massive, missile mosquitoes and dread encroaching dusk irritably toss child crocodile into oncoming traffic feel mildly guilty for child’s resulting decapitation approve of the speed and painlessness of said death wonder if quinine is in order.

Up the ladder: who wansa do that?
Down the ladder: the day we met

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Arithmetic Mean: 10.0
Weighted score: 5.237129
Overall Rank: 4129
Posted: May 5, 2009 6:34 PM PDT; Last modified: May 5, 2009 6:34 PM PDT
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[10] T. Jonathron Remp @ 76.192.231.3 | 12-May-09/3:36 PM | Reply
Aphricka is my favourite land aplenty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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