|
|
Water Music, Revisited (Free verse) by http://mulberryfairy
Follow footpath from airport of white people
to comfortable destination of white people
in generic suggestion of non-municipality Africa
(surprise, looks just like Maine except the crocodile)
Slap at massive, missile mosquitoes and dread encroaching dusk
irritably toss child crocodile into oncoming traffic
feel mildly guilty for childâs resulting decapitation
approve of the speed and painlessness of said death
wonder if quinine is in order.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
1 | 0 |
9 |
|
0 | 0 |
8 |
|
0 | 0 |
7 |
|
0 | 0 |
6 |
|
0 | 0 |
5 |
|
0 | 0 |
4 |
|
0 | 0 |
3 |
|
0 | 0 |
2 |
|
0 | 0 |
1 |
|
0 | 0 |
0 |
|
0 | 0 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 10.0
Weighted score: 5.237129
Overall Rank: 4165
Posted: May 5, 2009 6:34 PM PDT; Last modified: May 5, 2009 6:34 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
153 view(s)
|