Jasmine

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Apr 2009 · 1 comment

Tea and hot water, bikini tops in metallic colors, wanting to fall because it be fun, space and time joints bend like knees on stair, hand rail now clean can be slid down without fear I cleaned it myself. The maid is sharing her skills with her clients. They did not ask for it.

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[9] http://mulberryfairy 5-May-09/6:56 PM Reply

I like the placement of your punctuation- how it makes each phrase part of the line and part of a more complete thought with their different meanings.