Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live At The Hard Rock Cafe by horus8	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.237.73	23-May-06/3:56 PM
Trash.
Re: 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy	lmp 141.154.134.3	23-May-06/3:48 PM
interesting. i can see how this is quickly sketched together and that it is the result of a conversation. tough material to work with, but pretty clever and funny. i'm really torn between an -8- and -9-, but since you had the guts to post this, i will round up. ;)
Re: a comment on 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy	lmp 141.154.134.3	23-May-06/3:45 PM
now THAT is a concept worth some thought and maybe some writing.... imagine, a heaven that is *not* a bunch of goody 2 shoes(es). saavy sould, souls with panache, politcial agendas, style, vanity, and flair. sounds a lot more interesting to me than the "peraly gates" version. maybe i'm describing purgatory?
Re: a comment on A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove	lmp 141.154.134.3	23-May-06/3:31 PM
i suppose you would know, eh? wot?
Re: a comment on Monsters by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	23-May-06/2:04 PM
Well, you have to be rated before you can be overrated.
Re: a comment on Monsters by wilco	ALChemy 71.75.176.68	23-May-06/1:59 PM
It's the middle stanzas that kinda remind me of Instant Karma (alot of it is just in the rhythm) and the Chorus makes me think Morrison. I really don't consider you overrated let alone horribly overrated.
Re: a comment on Monsters by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	23-May-06/1:51 PM
Who's just trying to get by? I don't think you're getting it, but I'm glad you like it.
Re: a comment on Monsters by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	23-May-06/1:50 PM
Wow, comparing me to Jim Morrison and John Lennon at the same time. I'm flattered, but I don't really think so...well, maybe Morrison...he was horribly overrated. Actually, the chorus and verses were written at different times. That's why it seems a bit off kilter.
Re: a comment on A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 81.179.229.34	23-May-06/1:10 PM
And, dearest Imp, your wit smells like one.
Re: a comment on Descartes' Immortal Truth by Edna Sweetlove	ALChemy 71.75.176.68	23-May-06/12:11 PM
Some of us living folk already shit shamelessly. See above poem and author.
Re: a comment on Godproof Hat by Dovina	ALChemy 71.75.176.68	23-May-06/12:08 PM
Somewhere in that old endless stretch of comments is a Flintstones reference (To God'swife I think) that I thought was quite clever and apperently no one else did.
Re: a comment on Descartes' Immortal Truth by Edna Sweetlove	Dan garcia-Black 69.235.250.244	23-May-06/11:57 AM
Touché’, Imp.
Re: a comment on Descartes' Immortal Truth by Edna Sweetlove	lmp 141.154.134.3	23-May-06/11:51 AM
well, to be truthful, when the dead shit, they are. they are dead.
Re: A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove	lmp 141.154.134.3	23-May-06/11:47 AM
your satire is about as sharp as the unwashed bum.
Re: Split Me by Sunny	Dovina 17.255.240.6	23-May-06/11:06 AM
If this is about open-chest surgery, it's very dramatic. But I have a problem with the patient knowing what is taking place while under anaesthesia.
Re: Witch hanging at Dunchurch by Mona Lisa	Dovina 17.255.240.6	23-May-06/11:03 AM
An historical event like this requires, in my opinion, a longer development, prior to the punch line. A more flowing form might work better.
Re: Monsters by wilco	Dovina 17.255.240.6	23-May-06/10:55 AM
I like this a lot, but think "monsters" is too strong a word to describe them. They're not that bad - just trying to get by.
Re: Descartes' Immortal Truth by Edna Sweetlove	Dan garcia-Black 69.235.250.244	23-May-06/10:44 AM
This poem is excellent but for one fact. The dead will have, on occasion, a bowel movement after bacteria and gas have their way with food left in stomach and intestines. So, one may shit and not be. Sorry.
Re: a comment on Godproof Hat by Dovina	Dovina 17.255.240.6	23-May-06/10:39 AM
Buddahism is a godproof hat, or tries to be, because it stands in for religion, relieving its followers from the almighty.
Re: a comment on Godproof Hat by Dovina	Dovina 17.255.240.6	23-May-06/10:36 AM
The last stanza reminds me of a conversation between a forest ranger, a maker of gold, and a love-torn woman seeking shelter from the ravages of persistant atheism fighting in some netherworld against the forces of an almighty.