Re: a comment on The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.171	24-Aug-06/4:17 PM
I gave it 10/10 before. Now I realise you are demented. SO: 0/10
Re: a comment on The Christian Submariner by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.171	24-Aug-06/4:16 PM
I've revised my thinking: 0/10
Re: A prayer about Jesus by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.171	24-Aug-06/4:15 PM
You are fucking mad.
Re: Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.171	24-Aug-06/4:11 PM
I love shoving stools 8" up a boy's ass.
Re: a comment on A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.255.171	24-Aug-06/4:09 PM
Come on, baby, give it a 10! You know you want to. I'll reciprocate...indeed I'll do so now on account!
Re: a comment on A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 66.108.184.20	24-Aug-06/2:52 PM
Clearly not content with mere plagiarism (having reproduced my comment without permission), you have taken it upon yourself to deliberately misrepresent my position by posting my remarks out of context. I have nothing to apologise for, least of all to you.
Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	some deleted user 194.154.22.51	24-Aug-06/9:40 AM
tits
Re: O say, can you see? by Dovina	Sing4Jesus! 194.154.22.51	24-Aug-06/9:22 AM
Your heart is in the right place, but not your brain.
Re: a comment on The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!	Sing4Jesus! 194.154.22.51	24-Aug-06/9:20 AM
fuck off.
Re: a comment on The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!	Sing4Jesus! 194.154.22.51	24-Aug-06/9:20 AM
fuck off.
Re: The Tale Of Marietta And The Hornbag Priest (v.1) by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.242.226	24-Aug-06/8:16 AM
I'll start this off by giving it a 10 myself. I am my own harshest critic and I think this is the minimum it deserves. Everyone else, please be more generous.
Re: Why? by Stephen Robins	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Aug-06/7:13 AM
Fucking Cunts.
Re: A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Aug-06/6:37 AM
That's rather good.
Re: Hot by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Aug-06/6:33 AM
or not?
Re: On returning to a town where I used to live by Nicholas Jones	Caducus 86.137.20.84	24-Aug-06/1:23 AM
Strong and well crafted opening. This reminded me of Larkin's earlier works in his Juvenilia poems chronicling coventry in a repugnant light and the sense of sadness that his birthplace was decaying. Its an excellent piece with an assertive voice and deserves praise.
Re: A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove	Caducus 86.137.20.84	24-Aug-06/1:19 AM
bravo
Re: The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.212.140	23-Aug-06/3:28 PM
Fabulous! Utter shit!
Re: The Christian Submariner by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.212.140	23-Aug-06/3:28 PM
Fucking hilarious! Give it a 0/10 for talent, 10/10 for satire. The problem is: which? For the moment 5/10 and I'll make my mind up later.
Re: The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!	Dovina 70.38.78.229	23-Aug-06/3:18 PM
it sounds so cliche that I wonder if it's satire. Either way, there is too much redundancy. For example,"He jokes around with a delightful sense of humor" simply means "He jokes." Most of the lines are like this.
Re: Quatrain by ALChemy	Dovina 70.38.78.229	23-Aug-06/3:15 PM
A novel way of putting forth an old truth. Thought provoking. Try a less bland title, like Beauty’s Kin, Son of Beauty, even the cliché - Beauty and the Beast.