Re: The ABC's Of Adultery by horus8	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.246.175	17-Sep-06/6:21 PM
Long winded, semi-illiterate mouse-dung.
Re: The High Hunt by horus8	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.246.175	17-Sep-06/6:20 PM
trash.
Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live... by horus8	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.246.175	17-Sep-06/6:19 PM
Total stupid girlish shite. You must be a mongo.
Re: A prayer for my mum by Mr Pig (again)	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.246.175	17-Sep-06/6:18 PM
My mum's cunt tasted of oysters.
Re: a comment on Week End Justification by half.italian	nypoet22 65.9.114.211	17-Sep-06/4:36 PM
in the movie king kong, a giant ape escaped his captors in new york, climbed a skyscraper and was shot down by airplanes. though he was a raging wild animal, kong was a sympathetic character. to me the hollow ears line means somebody who either won't or can't listen, much like those who suggested that putting kong on display for entertainment might not be such a good idea.
Re: a comment on weather poem part 7: a short, sudden gust by nypoet22	nypoet22 65.9.114.211	17-Sep-06/4:24 PM
no, i mean weather. as a verb it means to survive or get through something, to cope with it in spite of the harm it does, like "weathering the storm."
Re: weather poem part 7: a short, sudden gust by nypoet22	half.italian 70.36.242.152	17-Sep-06/12:15 PM
I think you mean "whether" in the last line.
Re: a comment on Week End Justification by half.italian	half.italian 70.36.242.152	17-Sep-06/12:06 PM
hmmmm... Show me how the skyscraper and airplanes fit. I worked on the "hollow ears" line for several hours and couldn't get it right. I tend to hide lack of skill behind vague, incomplete images. Does it make any sense?
Re: A prayer for my mum by Mr Pig (again)	moyah8 87.74.2.126	17-Sep-06/8:54 AM
GREAT piece of work
Re: a comment on Prayer by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 202.164.139.228	17-Sep-06/8:51 AM
He said all I needed to know by just His presence of love.
Re: a comment on Morning Glory by moyah8	moyah8 87.74.2.126	17-Sep-06/8:50 AM
Thnxs
Re: a comment on Prayer by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 202.164.139.228	17-Sep-06/8:49 AM
D. I see here that you have changed the entire context of the subject. I didn't just wait on Him... I searched for him, I sought. Impact. And again.. He quenched my questions of insecurities, doubts, fears, what ever I had been asking of him through His infilling of grace and love. As you state in your last line... breaking the stillness of my heart, He did not break the stillness of my heart... He merely honored me with His presence when I waited on Him in silence and patience and meekness. He made my spirit stand in awe of Him.
Re: a comment on Morning Glory by moyah8	moyah8 87.74.2.126	17-Sep-06/8:49 AM
Thanks
Re: a comment on Prayer by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 202.164.139.228	17-Sep-06/8:41 AM
Thank you, half.italian. Quenching and torrents of love and grace have been there on purpose. Quenching is to indicate that my soul was thirsting for His presence and I was filled..., and torrents of love and grace are to indicate that I was filled with his presence of love and grace... as simple as that.
Re: Satyr by ecargo	nypoet22 65.9.114.211	17-Sep-06/5:28 AM
ebrious! bittersweet too, i think.
Re: Flea poem by Sing4Jesus!	nypoet22 65.9.114.211	17-Sep-06/4:28 AM
boom boom whap! boom boom whap! boom boom whap! FUCKING boom boom whap!! Jesus FUCKING loves you! whoo! cute.
Re: When I look inside my heart by Engelbert Humpalot	nypoet22 65.9.114.211	17-Sep-06/4:23 AM
ieeeeeewwwwwwwww...... this transitions from concept poem to gross-out comedy. really it's two different pieces. i think you should have stopped at "Anybody wanna suck?"
Re: To be alive by nightowl	nypoet22 65.9.114.211	17-Sep-06/4:18 AM
hmm... couplets, hallmark style. on first glance it seems a bit childish as a composition, but i like the easy rhyme within and the half rhyme at the end.
Re: Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina	nypoet22 65.9.114.211	17-Sep-06/4:15 AM
read this once yesterday and again today. brave sprouts i love.
Re: Jose Streets by SupremeDreamer	nypoet22 65.9.114.211	17-Sep-06/4:12 AM
the word Toons, while it may be true to your experience, sounds weird, brings in images of kids cartoons, which i think isn't what you want. i happen to think that most of this reads brilliant, and probably sounds even moreso when you perform it. "barely soothed by the cheap malta flowin through my junkie veins" is definitely a line to keep. some tightening up might be called for, but i like the flow here a lot.