Re: Deep Translation by T. Jonathron Remp	impert&ent ::1	24-Jan-16/7:54 AM
Skating with the rays Shellfishing suits trackwise trainers
Re: a comment on Playing The Vibes by impert&ent	impert&ent ::1	21-Jan-16/6:37 PM
I reckon an answer is due. I was thinking about cannon, and smoke, and extending the metaphor from coiled rope to fumes. Sort of the opposite, also, where a rope falling to the sea floor would writhe around like smoke does in air.
Re: Stripping the willow by ecargo	Ranger ::1	4-Dec-15/3:31 PM
ecargo! I wanted to get in touch a while back but had no way. Are you still writing?
Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP	susanthered 127.0.0.1	21-Nov-15/12:58 PM
I bet the guy who wrote this is an amazing person and really great looking....what a hottie!
Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP	susanthered 127.0.0.1	21-Nov-15/12:57 PM
this poem is amazing!!! I love it...well done!!!!
Re: a comment on Sofia by daniella	daniella 127.0.0.1	28-Oct-15/5:19 PM
thank you much.
Re: a comment on wish by daniella	daniella 127.0.0.1	28-Oct-15/5:16 PM
thanks richa
Re: a comment on wish by daniella	daniella 127.0.0.1	28-Oct-15/5:15 PM
thank you thank you embersandenvelopes
Re: Psilocybin, and the Tale of a Happy Stoner by ARTIE	Y2kSlamPoet 127.0.0.1	13-Apr-15/4:24 PM
pulchritudinous? Wordy. Get rid of it. There's other aspects too that could use polish, and the more I think of it, the less worthy of a nine this is. The title though? SPECTACULAR@! Just don't get all sour on my seven, aye?
Re: Among The Stars by ARTIE	Y2kSlamPoet ::1	13-Apr-15/4:06 PM
My heart speaks not. It pulses with pulsars while drinkin' at the bar Goes cold while I'm hot 'n encourages me to take another shot till the last thing I see is the blasted stars.
Re: a comment on Some of us by daniella	Y2kSlamPoet ::1	13-Apr-15/4:02 PM
In hell drinkin' with the devil babe, that's where.
Re: Some of us by daniella	Y2kSlamPoet 127.0.0.1	13-Apr-15/4:01 PM
I'll give you a ten if you can condense this into a haiku. :P
Re: a comment on A mag that PAYS??? by SupremeDreamer	Y2kSlamPoet ::1	13-Apr-15/3:59 PM
When people call me selfish for drinking alone, it usually is because they have an interest in DRINKING MY SHIT FOR FREE. :) Oh, and being bloody irritating afterwards... before hand they're all hugs an kisses. -cue middle finger-
Re: a comment on Hobo. by SupremeDreamer	Y2kSlamPoet 127.0.0.1	13-Apr-15/3:47 PM
Lately? Where the hell have you been? This bit of squabblin' that we're engaged in is a direct result of one my recent comments on a poem of yours. PERIOD. Let us at least admit that artie, 'cause seriously?- your full of shit. Should I now pander twards your approval, because I have "fallen from grace lately"? Think that really matters bud? IT DOESN'T. By god, I've worn the orange wings of shame at one time. But when you decide to excrete shit, by god, I'm gonna call it shit. Aight? YOU FEEL ME BRO?
Re: a comment on Hobo. by SupremeDreamer	ARTIE 127.0.0.1	9-Apr-15/4:32 PM
I am not in the least bit hurt. I used to like many of your works but, aye and alas, you have fallen from grace lately.
Re: a comment on Hobo. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	9-Apr-15/4:21 PM
Ah, I see you're a wee bit butt-hurt, aye? :D Life itself is fucking vulgar you cunt-rag.
Re: Hobo. by SupremeDreamer	ARTIE 127.0.0.1	7-Apr-15/8:03 PM
Fuck you who looks down on me-- when Rome falls, you'll be fucked while I'll finally be set free. Set your own fucking condescending self free. Vulgarity obviously hasn't worked. Look around and realize, you shackle yourself.
Re: SUCH IS THE LOSS I FEEL by ARTIE	SupremeDreamer ::1	7-Apr-15/5:53 PM
Cliché, yeah, near pimple status? Oh... none of us want to know what parody i'd make of this... too fuckin easy, aye. Do you wish me to judge thy heart, or thy ART? This poem.. I give a four, so that thy heart might not sour. :)
Re: There Was Poetry For Them All by nentwined	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	7-Apr-15/5:49 PM
Aye... and amen to tbe muse we all love to abuse.
Re: A HANGMAN'S MOANING by Dhanesh M Kumar	daniella 127.0.0.1	22-Feb-15/7:24 AM
i love your thoughts. they are in the right place and the poem works on some levels. keep engineering the phrases. and perhaps punctuation is needed, for example: Alas doing, for the sake of bread no?