Re: a comment on The Editor by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 121.247.152.123	9-May-07/10:06 AM
BTW.. who's the pain who gave you a zero. Must be some nitwit.
Re: The Editor by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 121.247.152.123	9-May-07/10:05 AM
Good imagery D. Happy to read one of your poems after a long time. Sorry for the negligence. Hope you are having a whale of a time on the road. Praying for your safety.
Re: The Sunnyside of David Uden by lukehanney	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:50 PM
clunky
Re: Castle of Pandas IV by FreeFormFixation	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:48 PM
string band school of creative writing seems like
Re: again it happnes by skaskowski	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:45 PM
... yeah but whats it all mean? and is it Art? :-/... yes I'm sure it is :-)
Re: Worn Ruse by drnick	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:35 PM
fabulous concept not done full justice by this poem
Re: Lustlets of longing by bharat shekhar	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:32 PM
the poetry seemed to dry up after you came;... never mind, ... happens to all of us :-)
Re: The Emperor's new clothes by thetrev	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:27 PM
cutting edge improvisational phrasing with retro hip-hop under and overtones
Re: requiem for the dead generation by Prince of Void	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:11 PM
... cheer up; can't be that bad!
Re: Final Moon by Caducus	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:02 PM
kinda nice
Re: Altitude by half.italian	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/3:56 PM
an unwinding coil, eh? ... wassat? helium whispers is nice
Re: Snow by MacFrantic	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/3:48 PM
poweful opening swooned into greeting-card land
Re: a comment on The Editor by Dovina	Dovina 12.77.34.147	7-May-07/2:15 PM
A few scars to conceal - yes A transient life - yes Wasted moments won't return - yes My final tears might have already come What is this dream that's just begun? Ever with you? And how can it be beyond dreams? And beyond my tone - ok beyond pains - ok in your soul - ok What did you passed by? in the transience of life.....
Re: a comment on The Editor by Dovina	Prince of Void 80.71.127.110	7-May-07/2:05 PM
your poems,your scars concealed The transience of life..... Wasted moments won't return my final tears are to come the dream has just begun Ever with me Beyond my dreams beyond your tone beyond unexplained pains here in my soul I passed them by in the transience of life.....
Re: Final Moon by Caducus	half.italian 76.172.249.205	5-May-07/11:46 AM
I like some of the images, but they don't really join into a whole. Is this love? "surgeons on my father" says gentle to me, which is what I think you are going for. At the same time, the image of surgeons on my father reminds me of blood and sickness, rather than love. What are "English" hands? "slave", "voil", "blinded", "average" All those words in this poem just confuse me.
Re: Beetles by cheese.doodles	half.italian 76.172.249.205	5-May-07/11:30 AM
Beatles Brothers making music that ignites souls Teaching us of love, peace, and Drugs.
Re: Lustlets of longing by bharat shekhar	half.italian 76.172.249.205	5-May-07/11:18 AM
Delicious.
Re: a comment on grim task by lmp	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	4-May-07/11:19 AM
Well Edna is in a category of pompousness all of her own; she simply happens to be British. British opinions being pompous simply made my bile all the more venomous. :)
Re: a comment on requiem for the dead generation by Prince of Void	Dovina 75.82.86.162	1-May-07/4:03 PM
I don't know if "you" means me or your pain; it's a bit ambiguous. And a lot of folks would say both meanings are the same. Anyway, I, too, have already lived and died, and might as well lie down in that open grave. It's an optimistic position where nothing matters very much and all pleasures are possible. Tomorrow, I'll begin that cross-country bicycle trip I've been harping about. Like a homeless person sitting on the street with goals in her eyes, but no plans.
Re: a comment on grim task by lmp	Ranger 81.103.124.179	1-May-07/2:59 PM
I wasn't sure if the bile was directed more at Edna or at the pompousness of British opinions. After all, I consider myself to be incredibly pompous where nationality's concerned.