Re: Snow by MacFrantic	Skamper 202.6.132.210	19-May-07/4:31 PM
I felt the ice
Re: My Soul Cries Out by amanda_dcosta	Skamper 202.6.132.210	19-May-07/4:21 PM
There's a lot of this kind of poetry out there - standing out is a challenge. "And erase those emotions that cause me to Be disappointed in you." A clever line - a definate keeper
Re: Bookshop girls by Stephen Robins	Skamper 202.6.132.210	19-May-07/4:15 PM
Bookshop boys are a tiresome lot Corduroy trousers And a spotted bot
Re: a comment on A twisted Trail in Eden’s Garden by Dovina	Dovina 76.7.111.41	19-May-07/10:20 AM
Tell her no, any direction but that. Cross-country biking brings greater highs - 500 miles so far, 28,000 feet climbed, and only 12% there. But thanks for your concern.
Re: a comment on A twisted Trail in Eden’s Garden by Dovina	ALChemy 71.68.46.177	18-May-07/5:18 PM
Sorry hun, flower girl position has already been taken but the bride has been instucted to aim for you with the bouquet. Till then remember a rose as radiant as you needs no accompaniment of other flowers.
Re: My Soul Cries Out by amanda_dcosta	Dovina 69.34.71.200	18-May-07/1:24 PM
Like a psalm. David's were just as honest.
Re: a comment on A twisted Trail in Eden’s Garden by Dovina	Dovina 69.34.71.200	18-May-07/1:21 PM
It takes some knowledge of story to get that from the last two lines, which you seem to have.
Re: a comment on A twisted Trail in Eden’s Garden by Dovina	Dovina 69.34.71.200	18-May-07/1:19 PM
But not all Adams are so easily deceived. Even cutting through their nicknames and deciphering their secrecy often leaves an Eve lonely and flowerless.
Re: a comment on My Soul Cries Out by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 61.17.222.155	18-May-07/10:38 AM
Thanks Al. I agree it's more a prayer than poem, but I merely intended to portray my emotion poetically. And as for my comfortable communication to God.... it was my being honest with what I felt.
Re: A twisted Trail in Eden’s Garden by Dovina	ALChemy 71.68.46.177	18-May-07/10:35 AM
Very lyrical. Nice to see that from you. One must remember it took the devil himself to seduce Eve but it only took a woman to seduce Adam.
Re: Bookshop girls by Stephen Robins	ALChemy 71.68.46.177	18-May-07/9:31 AM
The entire cast of Monty Python farts in your general direction.
Re: My Soul Cries Out by amanda_dcosta	ALChemy 71.68.46.177	18-May-07/9:28 AM
I love how you admit to god feelings many would feel uncomfortable speaking about to god. "erase those emotions that cause me to be disappointed in you" for instance. More prayer than poem but a very good prayer.
Re: a comment on She dreams by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 61.17.222.155	18-May-07/6:23 AM
Al, Dr Peter Douglas, thanks. :-))))). Am all smiles.
Re: A twisted Trail in Eden’s Garden by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 61.17.222.155	18-May-07/5:38 AM
Hmmm.. lemme see. Quite a few points came to mind when I read this. First of all, I like the theme. Secondly, I like the similar syllables used like... suckered, sold and saddened... and verdict, vouched and valid. Thirdly... its very good imagery you've pictured there at the end, ie. the last two lines. Very emphatic. Good work.
Re: Beetles by cheese.doodles	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	17-May-07/8:46 AM
Excellent. I hate treading on things - like, you know, the earth.
Re: a comment on The Wingman by John Rambo	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	17-May-07/8:45 AM
Cutting... ...and True.
Re: a comment on Fraser Allonby Quidnam Cruris by Stephen Robins	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	17-May-07/8:24 AM
But, soft! what roar from yonder bottom breaks? 'Tis the feast of thy curried buns, Arise, sweet bun, kill the envious prune, Who is already sick and pale with grief, That bun made her fart far more than ye. Be not her maid, since the prune is envious; Her vestal livery is but sick and green And none but fools do consume it; cast it off It is my Bun, O, it is my Bun! O, that what a bun she were! She speaks yet she says nothing; what of that? My blood with buns courses; I will chance it. I am too bold, 'tis not to me she wreeks. Two of the fairest buns in all the heaven.
Re: Fraser Allonby Quidnam Cruris by Stephen Robins	Skamper 202.6.130.219	17-May-07/1:56 AM
LMFAO...So that's who ate all the pies! Looove this...
Re: a comment on the magic rock by nypoet22	Skamper 202.6.130.219	17-May-07/1:44 AM
I don't like quoting others to justify a write. I liked this much better the first time around. The last stanza is brilliant... Also - I do love the way the quote ends...a little ambigiously (spell check), the way I read it Bush is named as the evil. *S*
Re: garden spite by skaskowski	Skamper 202.6.130.219	17-May-07/1:37 AM
Somehow this makes me feel naked.